"A transformer robot",mum saysbody shaking with fear. "yeah like I belive that", i say with a smirk on my face. "no Rosette look", she says shortly. "Mum if you think im going to belive that then yourmore nuts than i thought",i said laughing. Her face flushes red with rage. "theres a robot you nut get down", she screams with a panicked tone in her voice. I suddenly hear it BOOM BOOM BANG TWACK everything turns pitch black "mum" i whisper there was no reply
O.M.G there is a real robot outside of my shop. This is totally awesome look it is massive, no wonder why its destroying everything look at that helicopter Mom, boooom!!! "Oh too late it exploded". No, no its pointing its gun at us what are we going to do ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I gaze around, watching buildings crumble about me.The thick toxic smoke fills the air making it hard to breathe. Military helecopters hover above me.I run off but all I see are gigantic foot-prints. Looking up I see a huge metal being... I'm stunned.
I was in my helicopter looking for a gripping story to share when suddenly this big mechanical robot came out of giant rock sent from Kripton. It was destoying everything even armadillo the armadillo(thats my pet). What will happen now.... DUN! DUN! DUN!
"we're under attack! I repeat we're under attack!" "me want to destroy all of you!" "AAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!", screamed all of the people that were roaming the streets. Boom! Boom! Boom! "the robot is getting closer!" yelled captain Rex through the microphone. "come on guys we've got one missle left! destroy it!"
AAAHHH! Robots are coming. "We're all going to die!!" The poor innocent people cried. The robots come closer and closer. People are trying to help each other to get away! This huge bullky thing is in front of me! I gulp. What is going to happen!!
HAHAHAHAHAHA! My plan worked, now everyone could see me as powerful and energetic! " Honey, don't do this or-...... " Homer couldn't finish. I did it. I killed the King and I don't feel happy. What have I done.... BANG!!!
As the robot attacked the city me and my family ran for their lives, e didnt want to be crushed by Dr.tinklepants giant robot. As his robot garbbed and crushed a car we got into a army helicopter and flew to Ireland, Dublin and we were safe.
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz AHHHHH what was that!!!!!!! Was it an earthquake or was it my dad just snoring hmmmmm no it felt more like like... A Robot every one run for your lifes man it is like im going to faint
I never wanted to do this. It's wrong. It's cruel.If I don't do it they will hunt me. Destroy me. As I sit inside this monsters head, everywhere, innocent children being murdered ... by me. I need to stop this. As I reach for the SELF-DESTRUCT, I see what's unmistakably...
after five hours of hard work i finally get a lunch break i go done to the cafeteria down stairs i got my usual it was fairly normal then something out of the tip of my eye struck me it was huge what was going to happen?
"Finished" I say stepping back from my work. I look into the eyes of the beast expecting a green glow but the eyes glow red. "AHHHH" I run as fast as my legs can carry me. "oh what have i created". BANG!!! Then I suddenly black out... Aria-Kereru
I was in my robot armour,Iron man was is name.he was battling Iron man 2,CABOON!!!!thanks j.a.r.v.i.s .Iron man 2 was dead.go Iron man x2 by julian yr 4 kakapo class
I saw a beautiful town before my eyes, but then a robot came and destroyed it. I tried to save the town by going up in a helicopter. It didn’t work and kept getting angrier and angrier. Suddenly I found a way to kill the robot and save my beautiful town. By Jasmine Barney Yr 2
I wanted to scream. To get away from the terrifying noises. Escape the destruction. I was glued to my seat. I had to keep watching. Something jumped out at me and my heart skipped a beat. I was just about howl again, when the T.V flashed "TO BE CONTINUED".
"Mayday! Mayday! Incoming..!" BOOM! There goes another skyscaper. The robot had a blue light for what looked like a heart and one blue eye. He called himself "The Cyclops". In one hand he was demolishing a giant logging truck and in the other.... "NNNOOOO..."
I was in a helicopter when suddenly I got hit by a rocket. I was spiralling down. Luckily my parachute opened just in time. Floating to the ground I saw the most fearsome robot ever. He had one big bulging blue eye and one ferocious hand crushing a bus. His other hand was a laser which was dierected at me.
There is a helicopter in the sky trying to destroy the giant robot storming through the city. Munching, crunching cars, trucks, buses, destroying everything. "AHH" people screamed at the top of their lungs. And me, just standing, staring. "No, not the pet shop"
"Help!" My helicopter is hit by a laser. Weo-weo. (Police sirens) "Please help me" I shouted. I have been blasted by a laser from the robot while going up. I crash landed in a paddock full of cows and cow poop. "Quickly, get my M4 so I can defend myself"
As I tremble onto the broken street, I puzzle over what could have possibly done this much destruction to our once crowded city?. I hear a smash, and see an armoured robot with bullet proof metal and a crushed car in its colossal hand. Suddenly, a mammoth sized claw grabs me aaaah........
BOOM,BOOM,BOOM, "YOU SALL BE DESTRYED!" declared the towering robot in his metalic voice. I know I'm safe but as I look down I see childeren crying, mothers screaming, teachers frantily giving orderss, blood everywhere. I couldn't stand the sight of it... I have to act, NOW!
"Mum?Mum!No answer. I crept out of my hiding spot and looked out the window.HOLY CHEESE!!! A GIGANTIC ROBOT IS HEADING FOR THE EMPIRE STATE BUILDING!!!The women are screaming and the babies are crying.It sends shivers down my spine.I dash over to Dad. I'm scared....
ROBOT ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! “Mum I’ll do my homework after I watch Harry Potter” said Dylan. One minute later… Boom, Crash, Smash. There was robot at my door. ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!!!. Run I tell my family. I hit my head as I ran out the door. I see a blinding flash.
7,8,9,10 Ready or not here I come. I peek through my fingers. Chaos, a giant robot had smashed down the house and half the city only it was a silent attack. I walk through the remains I was the only survivor "WHY" I scream, on my birthday.
AH! "a giant Battle Robot is trying to kill me help!" i screamed "don't worry ill save you!" "what another giant robot is trying to kill me aha i know why don't i get my ak47 and blow them all to peaces." ch ch boom! "well that was easy." :P :> :Q :O :3 :8 :B thanks for reading
I heard a shivering scream and then a thumbiling thump. Then what stood before me was big, bulky and giant. Glaring at this funny looking thing, I glance over at the shivering towns people huddled in one corner. I needed a miricle. Is this it? Is 2012 really the end?
Use your 50 words wisely to tell the best robot attack story you can. I am looking for suspense and excitement
ReplyDelete"A transformer robot",mum saysbody shaking with fear.
ReplyDelete"yeah like I belive that", i say with a smirk on my face.
"no Rosette look", she says shortly.
"Mum if you think im going to belive that then yourmore nuts than i thought",i said laughing. Her face flushes red with rage. "theres a robot you nut get down", she screams with a panicked tone in her voice.
I suddenly hear it BOOM BOOM BANG TWACK everything turns pitch black "mum" i whisper there was no reply
shannay
room weka yr 6
O.M.G there is a real robot outside of my shop. This is totally awesome look it is massive, no wonder why its destroying everything look at that helicopter Mom, boooom!!! "Oh too late it exploded". No, no its pointing its gun at us what are we going to do ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteMaximus
Kereru class
year 6
I gaze around, watching buildings crumble about me.The thick toxic smoke fills the air making it hard to breathe. Military helecopters hover above me.I run off but all I see are gigantic foot-prints. Looking up I see a huge metal being... I'm stunned.
ReplyDeleteBethan Bolton-Kereru class, yr 5
I was in my helicopter looking for a gripping story to share when suddenly this big mechanical robot came out of giant rock sent from Kripton. It was destoying everything even armadillo the armadillo(thats my pet). What will happen now.... DUN! DUN! DUN!
ReplyDeleteJacob Liddle
Kakapo class
YR 4
"we're under attack! I repeat we're under attack!" "me want to destroy all of you!" "AAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!", screamed all of the people that were roaming the streets. Boom! Boom! Boom! "the robot is getting closer!" yelled captain Rex through the microphone. "come on guys we've got one missle left! destroy it!"
ReplyDeletevery good story
DeleteAAAHHH! Robots are coming. "We're all going to die!!" The poor innocent people cried. The robots come closer and closer. People are trying to help each other to get away! This huge bullky thing is in front of me! I gulp. What is going to happen!!
ReplyDeleteBy Theresa
Yr 5
Kereru class
Again
ReplyDeleteHAHAHAHAHAHA! My plan worked, now everyone could see me as powerful and energetic!
" Honey, don't do this or-...... " Homer couldn't finish.
I did it. I killed the King and I don't feel happy.
What have I done....
BANG!!!
Xanthe Wardle
Weka Class
Year 5
<(") (^^^)
As the robot attacked the city me and my family ran for their lives, e didnt want to be crushed by Dr.tinklepants giant robot. As his robot garbbed and crushed a car we got into a army helicopter and flew to Ireland, Dublin and we were safe.
ReplyDeleteCeanna Bolton
Yr 4
Kakapo Class
r0Bo Bot
ReplyDeleteAnahera Kereru class year 5
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
AHHHHH what was that!!!!!!! Was it an earthquake or was it my dad just snoring hmmmmm no it felt more like like...
A Robot every one run for your lifes man it is like im going to faint
I love it great sence of humor love it Anahera
DeleteAria-kereru class
your so nice Aria i really miss you
Delete*CRY CRY CRY CRY CRY CRY CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WA*
Demon ... or Not?
ReplyDeleteI never wanted to do this. It's wrong. It's cruel.If I don't do it they will hunt me. Destroy me. As I sit inside this monsters head, everywhere, innocent children being murdered ... by me. I need to stop this. As I reach for the SELF-DESTRUCT, I see what's unmistakably...
Sam Ashley
Kotuku
Year 7
after five hours of hard work i finally get a lunch break i go done to the cafeteria down stairs i got my usual it was fairly normal then something out of the tip of my eye struck me it was huge what was going to happen?
ReplyDelete"Finished" I say stepping back from my work. I look into the eyes of the beast expecting a green glow but the eyes glow red. "AHHHH" I run as fast as my legs can carry me. "oh what have i created". BANG!!! Then I suddenly black out...
ReplyDeleteAria-Kereru
I was in my robot armour,Iron man was is name.he was battling Iron man 2,CABOON!!!!thanks j.a.r.v.i.s .Iron man 2 was dead.go Iron man x2
ReplyDeleteby julian yr 4 kakapo class
I saw a beautiful town before my eyes, but then a robot came and destroyed it. I tried to save the town by going up in a helicopter. It didn’t work and kept getting angrier and angrier. Suddenly I found a way to kill the robot and save my beautiful town.
ReplyDeleteBy Jasmine Barney
Yr 2
The Exterminator
ReplyDeleteI wanted to scream. To get away from the terrifying noises. Escape the destruction. I was glued to my seat. I had to keep watching. Something jumped out at me and my heart skipped a beat. I was just about howl again, when the T.V flashed "TO BE CONTINUED".
Sam Ashley
Kotuku
Year 7
I was just about to* howl again,*
Delete"Mayday! Mayday! Incoming..!"
ReplyDeleteBOOM!
There goes another skyscaper. The robot had a blue light for what looked like a heart and one blue eye. He called himself "The Cyclops". In one hand he was demolishing a giant logging truck and in the other....
"NNNOOOO..."
By Alisha Lewis
Weka
I was in a helicopter when suddenly I got hit by a rocket. I was spiralling down. Luckily my parachute opened just in time. Floating to the ground I saw the most fearsome robot ever. He had one big bulging blue eye and one ferocious hand crushing a bus. His other hand was a laser which was dierected at me.
ReplyDeleteBy Isaac Lewis
Tui
There is a helicopter in the sky trying to destroy the giant robot storming through the city. Munching, crunching cars, trucks, buses, destroying everything.
ReplyDelete"AHH" people screamed at the top of their lungs. And me, just standing, staring.
"No, not the pet shop"
By Taneeka Lewis
Kereru
"Help!"
ReplyDeleteMy helicopter is hit by a laser.
Weo-weo. (Police sirens)
"Please help me" I shouted.
I have been blasted by a laser from the robot while going up. I crash landed in a paddock full of cows and cow poop.
"Quickly, get my M4 so I can defend myself"
By Oliver Lewis
Piwakawaka
As I tremble onto the broken street, I puzzle over what could have possibly done this much destruction to our once crowded city?. I hear a smash, and see an armoured robot with bullet proof metal and a crushed car in its colossal hand. Suddenly, a mammoth sized claw grabs me aaaah........
ReplyDeleteBOOM,BOOM,BOOM, "YOU SALL BE DESTRYED!" declared the towering robot in his metalic voice. I know I'm safe but as I look down I see childeren crying, mothers screaming, teachers frantily giving orderss, blood everywhere. I couldn't stand the sight of it... I have to act, NOW!
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ReplyDelete"Mum?Mum!No answer. I crept out of my hiding spot and looked out the window.HOLY CHEESE!!! A GIGANTIC ROBOT IS HEADING FOR THE EMPIRE STATE BUILDING!!!The women are screaming and the babies are crying.It sends shivers down my spine.I dash over to Dad. I'm scared....
ROBOT ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete“Mum I’ll do my homework after I watch Harry Potter” said Dylan. One minute later… Boom, Crash, Smash. There was robot at my door. ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!!!. Run I tell my family. I hit my head as I ran out the door. I see a blinding flash.
Yr5 Kereru Class Dylan Didi
Hide and go RUN
ReplyDelete7,8,9,10 Ready or not here I come. I peek through my fingers. Chaos, a giant robot had smashed down the house and half the city only it was a silent attack. I walk through the remains I was the only survivor "WHY" I scream, on my birthday.
Kereru class
DeleteAH! "a giant Battle Robot is trying to kill me help!" i screamed
ReplyDelete"don't worry ill save you!"
"what another giant robot is trying to kill me aha i know why don't i get my ak47 and blow them all to peaces." ch ch boom!
"well that was easy." :P :> :Q :O :3 :8 :B thanks for reading
Logan McCrae
ReplyDeleteWEKA CLASS
YEAR 5
I heard a shivering scream and then a thumbiling thump. Then what stood before me was big, bulky and giant. Glaring at this funny looking thing, I glance over at the shivering towns people huddled in one corner. I needed a miricle. Is this it? Is 2012 really the end?
ReplyDeleteYear 8
Kea class