I gaze upon the miss shaped trees,shivers run down my spine. I feel a slight touch. "Huh?" "Who's there?" I gaze around, all I see are the graves of past beings. Mist floats above the ground. I hear a slight whisper "You will die..." "Be safe, Mwahaha!"
I saw a house with creepy whistling wind blowing around it. A creepy ugly woman with long scraggly hair was starring through the window. Evil black birds are screeching noises above my head. I creep two steps forward ... crack ... I am in a deep hole ... what now?
As I gaze out the old castle, I catch a glimce of three grave stones. I dash down-stairs to tell my family, but when I get there Mum, Dad and Grandpa we're gone, I run outside, I read the names. "Its them!" I cry I sit down and weep...
GET UP GET UP! cried mum it is the frist day at school BOO I said sadly. So there I was I dont't like it I cried come on you want get killed are you sure?
Tonight I walked toward the old abandoned house. I peered through the window to get a glimpse of what was happening. I saw Scooby Doo, Shaggy and the gang looking for clues. So I decided to walk with them. "Boo"!, I fainted......
It’s 1822. I am an orphan. I work as a chimney sweeper. Yesterday I worked at an extremely terrifying house. The Master beat me with a whip because I didn’t work fast enough. He says if I get stuck he’ll light the fire underneath me. I don’t want to die.
A dark cloud hovers above my house. I stare outside as the fog covers the ground. Crows squak in a scary way, little lights come through the clouds. Spiders hide behind the graves of the dead. kah! kah! crows swarm aroun my house. What are they trying to tell me?
Hush my pets, soon the winter moon will be full and we will once again drain the life force from a living person, as we have done every year for the past 423 years. I, Queen of the Raven people, will soon feel the rush of new life and be satisfied for another year.
There was a big spooky house in a forest without leaves. It started raining so I paid $50 to go inside the house to stay dry. It rained all night and I knew my Mum and Dad would be worried about me. I knew I was safe but they didn’t.
as I walk into the house I hear the faint crys of the dead.I hear the annoying crow on the dead tree.When im in the house I hear the shower running I open the shower door and oh my goodness what is that!
I was walking one day it was sunny.Then I looked at the huanted house and as always dark and loomy. Monsters,ghosts scary crows and that scary lady nobody I say nobody has been to her house and survived.
"Whoooo! Haaaaa! I will kill you. AAAGGGHHH!" "Matt. I'm scared. I wanna go home.", exclaimed Jack. "Oh toughen up wimp, you're five. You'll be fine.", said Matt. As they walked through the spooky amd scary house Matt even noticed that it was a bit scary. They thought they should go.
Nobody dares to come near this place because they all know what happened the last time some kids went trick or treating there. They swore that they saw the ghost of the creepy lady that lived there. Everything about this house and its surroundings gives me the heebie-jeebies.
No one ever comes in here. It`s all mine, not a single person. CREAK What was that? I see the door open. Light coming, and a shadow of a person. What a dumb one, no-one ever goes in here. It`s mine, I scare everyone and this one will be running home to his mummy just like all the rest!
It’s 1822. I’m an orphan. I’m an 8-year-old chimney sweeper. Yesterday I worked at an extremely terrifying house. Other orphans say it’s cursed. Master whipped me because I didn’t work fast enough. Master frightens me. If I get stuck he’ll light a fire underneath me. I don’t want to die…
^^^^^^^^^^ Just wanted to clarify that 8-year-old is one word. That is how they write it in published books. I looked it up on the internet. So only count it as one word.
I wanted to look in a haunted house. I was a little bit scared but still I went inside. Slowly I opened the front door, which squeaked. I saw a light at the wall. Just as I wanted to sceam I saw it was just a painting on the wall. I got such a fright that I turned around and ran all the way home.
"Begs not me." "Me neither." "I will go in then." There was someone in the window. a black crow in a tree and a graveyard at the front. I stepped inside. It was spooky. I callled out at the person behind the window. The only sound I heard was a bloodcurdling scream. I turned around and left as fast as possible.
Kimberly kakapo yr47 November 2012 01:46 As the fog creeps through the night. I looked outside the window, and all that I could see were the graves with cobwebs all over it. The crows making all the creepy noises and then they started surrounding my house. I felt so scared, are they trying to warn me?
ALISHA:)7 November 2012 20:00 I crept up the wooden steps into the room with the light. Inside was a man, dagger in one hand, in the other a pistol ,' The man had whispy silver hair and I could see his bones through his pale skin. One movement and blood painted the floor. He turned to me. Alisha Lewis weka yr 6
I open the door scared. As I walk through what seemed to be a house long ago, “hello” a whisper says. “Who’s there?” I ask. No answer. Voices, whispers are heard as I walk. No light nothing in the old house. The adrenalin pumping. Will I die?
(Im the ghost staring out the window) I sit back stare out of my window watching those kids trick or treating. The memories flood back. The the night of my murder. Halloween 1996 I was out trick or treating when I knocked at the door of this house.Then the last thing I heard was a gunshot.
Halloween was sad. A strange girl no one knows sits in an old, creaky house. Someone walks up to her house and dies. I did that and I never saw sunlight again. Nothing could replenish me. All I wanted was revenge...
I didn’t like my situation. Not one bit. I tried to get out but the door was jammed. It was dark. I don’t like darkness. Then I heard the scream. I stood up and ran. Straight through the wall and out into ... the noisy theme park!
Gazing carefully at the sharp old house. I glared through the window. Then I stepped back puzzled at the face staring at me through the fogged up glass. She had blood dripping down her white ruggerd gown. My hand pressed against hers. She screamed "stay with me".
I stare back, the old scrawny lady . A sharp earpeircing scream comes from the crow, unsettling me, I stumble backwards on the root of the dead tree that the crows stands on. Is this a figment of my imagination? Something dashes past me hitting me in the stomach, this isn’t my imagination.
Unwanted words...
ReplyDeleteI gaze upon the miss shaped trees,shivers run down my spine. I feel a slight touch. "Huh?" "Who's there?" I gaze around, all I see are the graves of past beings. Mist floats above the ground. I hear a slight whisper "You will die..." "Be safe, Mwahaha!"
By Bethan Bolton, yr 5, Kereru.
I saw a house with creepy whistling wind blowing around it. A creepy ugly woman with long scraggly hair was starring through the window. Evil black birds are screeching noises above my head. I creep two steps forward ... crack ... I am in a deep hole ... what now?
ReplyDeleteKhara Bouterey
Year 2
Graves..
ReplyDeleteAs I gaze out the old castle, I catch a glimce of three grave stones. I dash down-stairs to tell my family, but when I get there Mum, Dad and Grandpa we're gone, I run outside, I read the names. "Its them!" I cry I sit down and weep...
By Bethan Bolton yr5 kereru
GET UP GET UP! cried mum it is the frist day at school BOO I said sadly. So there I was I dont't like it I cried come on you want get killed are you sure?
ReplyDeleteBy Sapphire Kakapo Class Year 4
Tonight I walked toward the old abandoned house. I peered through the window to get a glimpse of what was happening. I saw Scooby Doo, Shaggy and the gang looking for clues. So I decided to walk with them. "Boo"!, I fainted......
ReplyDeleteBy Jacob Liddle
DeleteKakapo Class
YR 4
Be Afraid
ReplyDeleteIt’s 1822. I am an orphan. I work as a chimney sweeper. Yesterday I worked at an extremely terrifying house. The Master beat me with a whip because I didn’t work fast enough. He says if I get stuck he’ll light the fire underneath me. I don’t want to die.
Sam Ashley
Kotuku
Year 7
A dark cloud hovers above my house. I stare outside as the fog covers the ground.
ReplyDeleteCrows squak in a scary way, little lights come through the clouds. Spiders hide
behind the graves of the dead. kah! kah! crows swarm aroun my house.
What are they trying to tell me?
Maximus
kereru class
year 6
"CAW CAW"
ReplyDeleteHush my pets, soon the winter moon will be full and we will once again drain the life force from a living person, as we have done every year for the past 423 years. I, Queen of the Raven people, will soon feel the rush of new life and be satisfied for another year.
Ben Rodgers
Yr4
Kakapo
There was a big spooky house in a forest without leaves. It started raining so I paid $50 to go inside the house to stay dry. It rained all night and I knew my Mum and Dad would be worried about me. I knew I was safe but they didn’t.
ReplyDeleteas I walk into the house I hear the faint crys of the dead.I hear the annoying crow on the dead tree.When im in the house I hear the shower running I open the shower door and oh my goodness what is that!
ReplyDeleteby Matthew winch
I was walking one day it was sunny.Then I looked at the huanted house and as always dark and loomy. Monsters,ghosts scary crows and that scary lady nobody I say nobody has been to her house and survived.
ReplyDeleteby matthew
"Whoooo! Haaaaa! I will kill you. AAAGGGHHH!" "Matt. I'm scared. I wanna go home.", exclaimed Jack. "Oh toughen up wimp, you're five. You'll be fine.", said Matt. As they walked through the spooky amd scary house Matt even noticed that it was a bit scary. They thought they should go.
ReplyDeleteNobody dares to come near this place because they all know what happened the last time some kids went trick or treating there. They swore that they saw the ghost of the creepy lady that lived there. Everything about this house and its surroundings gives me the heebie-jeebies.
ReplyDeleteMarcus Curry yr6
No one ever comes in here. It`s all mine, not a single person.
ReplyDeleteCREAK
What was that? I see the door open. Light coming, and a shadow of a person. What a dumb one, no-one ever goes in here. It`s mine, I scare everyone and this one will be running home to his mummy just like all the rest!
ReplyDeleteBe Afraid... Or Else
It’s 1822. I’m an orphan. I’m an 8-year-old chimney sweeper. Yesterday I worked at an extremely terrifying house. Other orphans say it’s cursed. Master whipped me because I didn’t work fast enough. Master frightens me. If I get stuck he’ll light a fire underneath me.
I don’t want to die…
Sam Ashley
Kotuku
Year 7
^^^^^^^^^^ Just wanted to clarify that 8-year-old is one word. That is how they write it in published books. I looked it up on the internet. So only count it as one word.
ReplyDeleteFrom Sam
I wanted to look in a haunted house. I was a little bit scared but still I went inside. Slowly I opened the front door, which squeaked. I saw a light at the wall. Just as I wanted to sceam I saw it was just a painting on the wall. I got such a fright that I turned around and ran all the way home.
ReplyDelete"Begs not me."
ReplyDelete"Me neither."
"I will go in then."
There was someone in the window. a black crow in a tree and a graveyard at the front. I stepped inside. It was spooky. I callled out at the person behind the window. The only sound I heard was a bloodcurdling scream. I turned around and left as fast as possible.
Kimberly kakapo yr47 November 2012 01:46
ReplyDeleteAs the fog creeps through the night. I looked outside the window, and all that I could see were the graves with cobwebs all over it. The crows making all the creepy noises and then they started surrounding my house. I felt so scared, are they trying to warn me?
ALISHA:)7 November 2012 20:00 I crept up the wooden steps into the room with the light. Inside was a man, dagger in one hand, in the other a pistol ,' The man had whispy silver hair and I could see his bones through his pale skin. One movement and blood painted the floor. He turned to me. Alisha Lewis weka yr 6
ReplyDeleteI open the door scared. As I walk through what seemed to be a house long ago, “hello” a whisper says. “Who’s there?” I ask. No answer. Voices, whispers are heard as I walk. No light nothing in the old house. The adrenalin pumping. Will I die?
ReplyDeleteYear 5
Kereru Class
The night of my death.
ReplyDelete(Im the ghost staring out the window)
I sit back stare out of my window watching those kids trick or treating. The memories flood back. The the night of my murder. Halloween 1996
I was out trick or treating when I knocked at the door of this house.Then the last thing I heard was a gunshot.
Unlikely Deaths
ReplyDeleteHalloween was sad. A strange girl no one knows sits in an old, creaky house. Someone walks up to her house and dies. I did that and I never saw sunlight again. Nothing could replenish me. All I wanted was revenge...
Xanthe the penguin
Year 5
Weka class
Screaming in the dark
ReplyDeleteI didn’t like my situation. Not one bit. I tried to get out but the door was jammed. It was dark. I don’t like darkness.
Then I heard the scream. I stood up and ran. Straight through the wall and out into ... the noisy theme park!
Sam Ashley
Year 7
Kotuku
Gazing carefully at the sharp old house. I glared through the window. Then I stepped back puzzled at the face staring at me through the fogged up glass. She had blood dripping down her white ruggerd gown. My hand pressed against hers. She screamed "stay with me".
ReplyDeleteYear 8
DeleteKea class
I stare back, the old scrawny lady .
ReplyDeleteA sharp earpeircing scream comes from the crow, unsettling me, I stumble backwards on the root of the dead tree that the crows stands on. Is this a figment of my imagination? Something dashes past me hitting me in the stomach, this isn’t my imagination.
shannay weka yr6