I see storm clouds drawing near the village. I try to warn the villagers but I'm not moving. Suddenly lightning struck one house then another. I yell for help but there was no answer. Tears flood down my face, suddenly the storm clouds disappear with the wind....that brought them...
I'm breathless. It was worth the huge walk. The village down there as well as the kingdom. The beautiful mountains. The wind blows the clouds away making it a cloudless day. I see a kereru dancing with the wind and a kiwi scatters past. Can you guess were I am.
WARNING! I just reached the end of the path, first aid kit in hand along with a supply of food. The radio anouncment was flashing in my mind, "Hurricane starting in ten minites!" I'm the only surviver.The rest are surronded in a nightmar!
I run outside I see a path I run up it I see an ancient town with thunder clouds towering over the town. I dash down the path to tell my dad what I have seen I see him sleeping or is he really sleeping? Everyone was hit by lightning.
I was walking in Smallville like any other day but then I saw grey clouds they were closing up on me I felt like I was TRAPPED! I had nothing to do but lay there and cry I felt alone I was there by myself.
Cabnim City In Danger! Clouds creep over the city causing us to tremble fearfully. Being in a high place is hazardous when it comes to electrical storms and we only have one small path to evacuate. We wouldn't all escape in time and if we did all Cabnim would have to survive is wilderness... _ _ ( \/ ) ( ^^ ) <- IT IS A BUNNY!!!!!!! (" )(" )
A day of remembering is a day of a tale, a tale of wilderness and also a hidden door. I was walking through mountains paths as I spot a castle and a storm. I retire to the castle wondering if I can find the door to the town above...
He was running in terror, screeching around the path. He saw smoke coming from a storm cloud with a clap of thunder drifting fluently through it. He could see the headline now, "Boy struck by lightening in Fantasy Land"
I nearly scream with excitment. My whole lifes studying has come to an end. I have found it. The long lost village where I used to live as a child. The one I was brought up in, my home city. I walk excitedly up the track to my old home...... Eva McCauley kereru class 50 words
They're coming.Who's coming,I scream no answer I scream again and again until I collapse.I feel my knees a warm liquid drips onto my hand,blood.I stumble over the concrete.darkness,is everywhere.the darkness swallows me.I feel and am so alone.
As the clouds rolled in I try to warn the village below. If another storm came as big as the last all the million dollar mansions would go tumbling down the mountain. If the clouds came any quicker they will not have time to evacuate on such a small path.
Ive traveled many places but nothing compares to this place. The grass is pure green the trees, all in the right place. Nothing seems to be wrong with this place. There are high mountains and low mountains. Thank you God for a wonderful place to go.
I climbed the hill one last time , but all I can see is dark grey clouds. I can see a small town with lots of civilians. I stumble into a gorse bush and get badly hurt. Someone help me.
I see clouds, dark clouds, I yell for someone, anoyone then i hear a slight voice in the distance. I start to yell back but then, BOOM! , no answer. I cry franticily for help while yelling but theres no answer again, i lay down moveless, suddenly i feel a slight touch, i smile....
They hated me, I was a wreck tattered clothes and messed up hair. The village rulers hated me Dumped me half dead on the road. I got up and moved on they had let me here to survive in the storm, They had left me here, to die!
I woke up in a weird place all I could remember was walking and BOOM! Everything went black.I went out the door and ran down the path. Would I find home? I could hear people shouting, I could see the clouds so I better hurry. Good bye town.
I see clouds, dark clouds, I yell for help, i hear a slight voice in the distance, I yell back franticily. BOOM! I got no answer i thought about it, did she or he get struck? Tears storm down my cheek. I feel a slight touch, I stop crying...
I see storm clouds rolling over the hills towards the mysterious dark stone city in the green grassy valley below. Sparkling blue streams from the small city of Nelson in a huge crevice on the hill side.
I was in the great city of Lavina the clear water was shining in the sun the great storm that only came once a year was coming 27 people were stocking up on food because the government did not let people go out in the streets when the big storm was here.
A storm was coming,the old town on the hill was in trouble. The town was not stable enough, i called for help while I was trapped in a tower,i call out one time and the very last and she heres me i sigh of relief.
The Cliff is impossibly high, a path twists around its body right down to the valley below, home to a village. The Cliff is clothed by dozens of vibrant plants,although the village has such an astonishing view,grey clouds are stretching rapidly over the valley, a storm is coming.
I was exploring the hills. I walked on a steep hill, I found a village. Then I turned around, I could see everything especially the fresh grass. Then all of a sudden dark,stormy clouds came over the village. I stared just for awhile. What was going to happen?
When I was walking, I saw a path then I followed that path. It was really long. Finally I reached a village.I noticed big dark clouds were coming far away and then I thought I might fall down. Am I safe at this place?
It was worth the long walk, pain. But as I come to this beautiful place I am left breathless by the beauty and wonder that can be found in this place. But as I start exploring, the storm comes craving for food (people)....
I was walking up the same old road like I used to everyday, whistling the same old tune. Memories came whizzing past me. I used to loved this place, now I think of it as a devilish place. The thunder clouds are coming closer and closer, then I was GONE...
It was a hot summers day and the villagers were walking up to the towers. BOOM! suddenly thunder and lightening struck the mountains and the villagers started screaming and running for their lives.....by Finn Kakapo class
I was walking up the hill on a sunny day just as any other person would do. Suddenly the clouds came booming in I ran down the hill to a very small village to get shelter.
I watch the dark clouds surround me as I stroll down the hill. It suddenly goes dark I scream in tears for help all I receive is a gust of wind. I hear a voice in my head you can do this, stay alive, believe in yourself.
I was walking along a path that I found when I went for my morning walk. I saw a storm coming. OH NO! I was thinking how stupid I was walking along when I knew a storm was coming. HELP ME! Hannah Jones Kakapo
Sprinting through the mountains, I try to get away. Then a magnificent village appears. I spot my persuer behind me; his face the epitome of furiosity. He isn't going to stop now. I scramble up a cliff. The rocks set loose by my feet smother my opponent. Mission accomplished.
I was walking through the mountains on a sunny summery day but suddenly a storm appeared!!! DON! DON! DON! DON! I was really really scared suddenly a lightning bolt hit me and I got electrcuted. I was so lucky that I suvived and did'nt die.
"Ahhhhhh!" The villagers cried. There were big storm clouds overhead. "Get in your houses" a man shouted. So everyone ran into their houses and turned on the fire. People thought: How did this happen? First it was a nice day and then BOOM storm clouds went over the village!
She looked up at the spookey gray clouds.She had to leave the quiet village before the storm came.She looked down the cliff and saw a devastating seen below filled with war,blood and death.Then suddenly silence. War, blood and death gone.It was the epitome of peace.
"A STORM!!!!!! Get into your houses" yelled a man. All the kids are scared. All the mum's hugged their kids so so tight. All their homes got stuck by lightning. Everyone screamed sooooo loudly "AHHHHHHHH" A baby got struck by lightning. "Oh NO" said the family "IT'S SO BAD".
"Oh no a storm"I said as I ran up the hill.I found out I wouldn't make it so I ran back down and sat up my tent.I got to sleep and when I woke up my tent was burned after that I ran to the villge.
The first day of the year, skies sunny and blue. children playing. A silence and storm clouds roll over. I've seen those type of clouds before. Villagers disappeared in them, no-one knows where. I ran from house to house. I have to warn everyone.It is too late!
It was time.The time of the battle. But there was no one in sight. No sound. No movement.Then BANG! I knew it was time for battle. I ran for my life, but still nothing happened. There was something wrong. What was the bang? What was the bang? CHARGE!!!
She looked up at the spookey gray clouds. She had to leave the guiet village the storm came.She looked down the cliff and saw a devastating seen filled with war,blood and death.And then suddenly silence. War,blood and death gone. It was the eiptome of peace.
Following the path to the old fashion city. Clouds coming over not just ordinary clouds storm clouds. So I ran to the village to warn the villagers a storm was coming. while I was running lightning struck. I was so terrified I started running back.
I stumble along the unfamiliar track, away from the sprawling concrete jungle that is, was, my home. The people I thought loved me, would never betray me, are now forced to hunt the criminal that the council believes I am. Stopping and spotting the houses above me, I smile. Hope.
Home (By Nathanpowick) I was succesfully running away from home and all of those hateful chores like dishes, cleaning and dusting, I hated it. Suddenly black clouds appeared out of nowhere. A storm was coming and it was coming fast. I was scared and needed shelter, badly. I turned back to safty ...... Home.
I had run many miles away. Away from the town on the hill and the hate and sorrow that came with it. I had done something that could never be forgiven. And the consequences were sure to come. I did what i had to do and for that I'm proud....
My legs ached after the gruelling climb to the hospitable village. It was safe haven for people like me whose former villages were savaged by war. The homes were beautiful with lovely big gardens with children screeching with laughter in them. Then I came to my house it was amazing.
I was in my castle and i was king . I had some soup a clouds came and rained over me so i needed more soup so i got some more and i thought about what i wanted for tea soup and i went out side and went for a walk.
Running from revenge. I come across a medieval castle where dead bodies lay which reminds me of what I have done. A storm brews and Im stuck between life and death. I stride to find protection. I here a ghostly whisper saying I know what you did, am i the next victim
In a windy town far from the sea was lived an old man. one day he saw some clouds they look weid.so he went to hied he saw a mysteriose villarge it is his old town that was hieden away for 70 years.he heard a noise what.
Flash!! A lightning bolt struck my heart.If only I could of walked into the village ahead of me and not stood,startled by its beauty.Then I would have been near a hospital and not die here out in the jungle. If only I had taken the storm clouds as a clue to run and hide. But it is too late.
I walk along the road and see big dark storm clouds, some lightening strikes a house and burns it down, everyone in the village is screaming. Then there is a big boom, everyone cries out for help, the village is starting to slide down the hill..........
I was walking along when I was blinded by the beauty. I was standing there for hours when a huge storm came .I run into the village .There was fires everywhere. everyone paniced we we where all gone forever
I stared into the haunting eyes of the mighty thunder clouds on the horizon as I ran, ran from that treacherous village. I never belonged there, I stood out from all those stuck up wealthy people. I always got made fun of. I looked down and saw it, home. Hooray!
I walk along the long, windy pathway that hopefully leads to something, shelter or food. I’m so tired, so exhausted. I’m just about to fall asleep on the side of the path when I hear kicking feet and threatening voices. They take me to some mysterious place. Where?
I watch as we venture further and further away, my own city, my friends & family, MY LIFE leaving me. This one man has destroyed me, I know for sure im going to die! We travel down the road but the deeper we get the more im cloaked in darkness.
As I walked along the rough pathway I saw the sun set slowly around me. I still had a long way until I reached my tiny village. When I got to the top I saw people rushing into there houses as dark clouds covered the sky.
I was staring out at the valley when the storm came, a lightening bolt hit the tree behind me I stumbled down the path hoping to get to the town, just as I thought that I'd got to safety, a few thousand volts of electricity hit me. I was dead!
I Pack fast. There is a storm coming. I run to get away from it. I shot along a track just out of town. I slip with a cry of pain. All I can do is lie there in agany and wight for the storm to take me.
Finally I reached the town of Albany. I was glad to be there after going hard out Bear Grylls style for days in the forest. I found a hotel and stayed there for a few nights while the storm cleared up. Then I left down the small path back home.
Three days since the thunderous storm had struck, people are still stunned and confused. For some reason i look down and see some thing i have never seen before a tiny village! Ben (kea class) year 8
It was dark. I could see a big sand storm was coming. Only about six houses were free of the horrible storm. I was stumbling towards the six dark shapes. Suddenly I tripped over. Now I was crawling across the sandy ground in crab style. Help! If only Batman would come!
10 years ago a disasturous storm came and it distroyed our humble settlement. It wiped out the countrie side and killed many of the people that lived here. I thought it would never happen again, but I was wrong.
Why was this road familiar? Screams of terror interrupted my thoughts. I looked around to locate the danger but all I see is darkness. They obviously knew what was happening or what was about to happen but I didn`t. BOOM! Lighting struck ZIZ! Then I blacked out... Susannah Kea class Yr 7
I see the storm coming so i grab my stuff I need and I run down a little track I hear thunder cracks then the path came to a end. I thought i was gonna die the thunder clouds are coming closer and closer but it is to late.
Autumn,the best time of year but then,candy clouds came to the village.Everyone ran to there homes,but instead of thunder, it was candy.Thank you candy guy. julian anderson kakapo class year 4.
"Thud, thud, thud." I arised thinking it was an ordinary day when I heard banging on my window, locals were telling me to get out. Emotions and perculiar feeling were approacing my head as I couldn't figure out why. Then I realised our town had been destroyed, everything had been snatched.
It was a great day playing in the jungle when i noticed a storm was coming I ran as fast as i could. when a flash of lightning struck and relised i was just on time.
I had spent 4 demanding days staggering through undulating hills and I was almost there. My body was the epitome of fatigue and I was uncertain I would reach my destination. Abruptly I heard a rumbling sound coming from behind the hills. Suddenly an angry, ominous looking cloud shadowed the sky. A storm was coming.....
As i scrambled up the rocky banks of the lost city my opponent shoots an arrow at my head and narrowly misses i rip it out of the bank and chuck it at him then I see him role down the hill i am the winner i am victorious.
Something woke me up, then I saw it out of the window; "Storm" I scream as loud as I could. People come running around frantically trying to prepare for the storm that was inevitably coming, and soon. There was still so much to do, but there was just so little time...
As she walked up the path she heard a yell for help she ran but when she got there and saw what lay there she gasped the king had been murdered.She looked around a little boy yelled she killed him I seen it she ran into the bush and was never seen again.
The city was deserted. Not a sound arose from the quiet streets, where the children used to play and dogs would bark. The town was a ticking time bomb which would soon be ready to erupt. Maybe 2012 really is the year when the world ends? It's up to you....
I was walking up the spur it was a warm summers day the oak leaves rustling in the wind the all of a sudden i heard a low rumbling sound and knew the village was doomed
I look up to the magnificent view of the villages hills to see thick, black thunder clouds rolling over the hill. As I warn everyone around me, mixed emotions were going through me head, but there was little time, I had to get out of here.
Nobody comes, nobody goes, its been this way forever. The path out is small and overgrown. Suddenly I hear a voice boom, the epitome of anger, "No-one ever leaves, no-one is allowed to leave". I sprint out and away down the path until I can't run any further...safe.
I walk the muddy track. My city looks amazing from up here. Then I see Magic Castle. Rain, thunder and lightning strike, this is the worst that can happen in Newland. I ran for help and to alert everyone, there was nothing left, everyone’s survival is a priority to me.
Blinding, black clouds engulf the city in rage. BANG! Off goes a gun. I had to get down there and save them because that was my job. I have to get there fast or no-one will be able to see again.
I sit peering through my ripped curtain not able to move. The idea of a hurricane sent my head spinning. I run outside and collapse into a bed of freshly mowed grass. I wrap my nervous fingers around a patch of grass ripping fruiously and threw it.
As I walk along The Path Of Peanut Butter I look up at the Kingdom Of Fried Eggs towering above me. Mr Bennidict called from his toast tower, " Watch out!" I look up at the Holladaise clouds and wonder if I will make it through The Valley Of Breakfast.
Peering down to the village below wondering if i should attack village and make sure the bandits never try to burn down our kingdom and kidnap our princess again or maybe i should just stay and let the water that the clouds are bringing fluid over the village below
There once was a road that led to a mysterious city with wild plants on a magnificent mountain. Poppe were rampaging through the city as the wild things creeped over the land. The hid because they were too scared to fight. The wild reached the city and ate them all.
BOOM! I hear a sound in the distance and see dark black clouds. What is happening I ask myself. I hear someone yellig 'We are under attack!!' It is a bomb. It must be. I hide and hope everyone is ok. Everything around me is pitch black.
Horay! I found were I was born. "Help" said the Presidant. "We are under attack! Get some water." Fire Fire Boom a Cannonball blasted the tank. "Retreat! Retreat!" shouted the Baddie.
What a loveley view I can see. Up in the sky I saw stormy back clouds rolling in fast. People were screaming 'Oh no there is a storm coming!' 'Help me, my baby is stuck up in the tree!' 'WWAAAAA!' The babies cries filled my ears. I saved her just on time.
Walking down the road I saw big roads in the distance. They came closer very fast. Quickly I ran back to our village to warn the people. The clouds looked threateningly big. Our houses were standing on the top f the mountain so we had to close all the windows and doors.
We've been running for so long now, gleaming from the darkness there's a town further up the road maybe they'll give us a place to stay and rest. We draw closer I see it the same darkness we've been running from. We have to warn them before its too late, is anywhere safe?
I see storm clouds drawing near the village. I try to warn the villagers but I'm not moving. Suddenly lightning struck one house then another. I yell for help but there was no answer. Tears flood down my face, suddenly the storm clouds disappear with the wind....that brought them...
ReplyDeleteBethan Bolton - Kereru.
I'm breathless. It was worth the huge walk. The village down there as well as the kingdom. The beautiful mountains. The wind blows the clouds away making it a cloudless day. I see a kereru dancing with the wind and a kiwi scatters past. Can you guess were I am.
ReplyDeleteAria Healey (Kereru)
I'm guessing your in the Bay of Plenty, NZ!! Livia Healey
DeleteWARNING! I just reached the end of the path, first aid kit in hand along with a supply of food. The radio anouncment was flashing in my mind, "Hurricane starting in ten minites!" I'm the only surviver.The rest are surronded in a nightmar!
ReplyDeleteI run outside I see a path I run up it I see an ancient town with thunder clouds towering over the town.
ReplyDeleteI dash down the path to tell my dad what I have seen I see him sleeping or is he really sleeping? Everyone was hit by lightning.
BY PATRICK!
I was walking in Smallville like any other day but then I saw grey clouds they were closing up on me I felt like I was TRAPPED! I had nothing to do but lay there and cry I felt alone I was there by myself.
ReplyDeleteCabnim City In Danger!
ReplyDeleteClouds creep over the city causing us to tremble fearfully. Being in a high place is hazardous when it comes to electrical storms and we only have one small path to evacuate. We wouldn't all escape in time and if we did all Cabnim would have to survive is wilderness...
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( ^^ ) <- IT IS A BUNNY!!!!!!!
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A day of remembering is a day of a tale, a tale of wilderness and also a hidden door. I was walking through mountains paths as I spot a castle and a storm. I retire to the castle wondering if I can find the door to the town above...
ReplyDeleteXanthe Wardle. Weka class.
Exactly 50 words.
He was running in terror, screeching around the path. He saw smoke coming from a storm cloud with a clap of thunder drifting fluently through it. He could see the headline now, "Boy struck by lightening in Fantasy Land"
ReplyDeleteBy Reuben Nimmo
I nearly scream with excitment. My whole lifes studying has come to an end. I have found it. The long lost village where I used to live as a child. The one I was brought up in, my home city. I walk excitedly up the track to my old home......
ReplyDeleteEva McCauley
kereru class
50 words
They're coming.Who's coming,I scream no answer I scream again and again until I collapse.I feel my knees a warm liquid drips onto my hand,blood.I stumble over the concrete.darkness,is everywhere.the darkness swallows me.I feel and am so alone.
ReplyDeleteAs the clouds rolled in I try to warn the village below. If another storm came as big as the last all the million dollar mansions would go tumbling down the mountain. If the clouds came any quicker they will not have time to evacuate on such a small path.
ReplyDeleteBy Megan Ritchie
Ive traveled many places but nothing compares to this place. The grass is pure green the trees, all in the right place. Nothing seems to be wrong with this place. There are high mountains and low mountains. Thank you God for a wonderful place to go.
ReplyDeleteBy Maximus-Kereru year 6
I climbed the hill one last time , but all I can see is dark grey clouds. I can see a small town with lots of civilians. I stumble into a gorse bush and get badly hurt. Someone help me.
ReplyDeleteBy Jacob Yr 4 Kakapo class.
I see clouds, dark clouds, I yell for someone, anoyone then i hear a slight voice in the distance. I start to yell back but then, BOOM! , no answer. I cry franticily for help while yelling but theres no answer again, i lay down moveless, suddenly i feel a slight touch, i smile....
ReplyDeleteBethan Bolton - kereru :)
They hated me, I was a wreck tattered clothes and messed up hair. The village rulers hated me
ReplyDeleteDumped me half dead on the road. I got up and moved on they had let me here to survive in the storm, They had left me here, to die!
Simonne - Kereru
I woke up in a weird place all I could remember was walking and BOOM! Everything went black.I went out the door and ran down the path. Would I find home? I could hear people shouting, I could see the clouds so I better hurry. Good bye town.
ReplyDeleteBy Bella
Deletesorry not
50 words
I see clouds, dark clouds, I yell for help, i hear a slight voice in the distance, I yell back franticily. BOOM! I got no answer i thought about it, did she or he get struck? Tears storm down my cheek. I feel a slight touch, I stop crying...
ReplyDeleteBethan Bolton - Kereru!
I see storm clouds rolling over the hills towards
ReplyDeletethe mysterious dark stone city in the green grassy valley below. Sparkling blue streams from the small city of Nelson in a huge crevice on
the hill side.
By Mikayla Homesley
I was in the great city of Lavina the clear water was shining in the sun the great storm that only came once a year was coming 27 people were stocking up on food because the government did not let people go out in the streets when the big storm was here.
ReplyDeleteA storm was coming,the old town on the hill was in trouble. The town was not stable enough, i called for help while I was trapped in a tower,i call out one time and the very last and she heres me i sigh of relief.
ReplyDeleteCeanna,kakapo class Yr4
The Cliff is impossibly high, a path twists around its body right down to the valley below, home to a village. The Cliff is clothed by dozens of vibrant plants,although the village has such an astonishing view,grey clouds are stretching rapidly over the valley, a storm is coming.
ReplyDeleteI was exploring the hills. I walked on a steep hill, I found a village. Then I turned around, I could see everything especially the fresh grass. Then all of a sudden dark,stormy clouds came over the village. I stared just for awhile. What was going to happen?
ReplyDelete" Oh no, oh no " cried the villagers, clouds of poisonous gases are coming towards us from the hills " quick hide in the towers," but it was too late.
ReplyDeleteBen Rodgers
Kakapo
yr4
When I was walking, I saw a path then I followed that path. It was really long. Finally I reached a village.I noticed big dark clouds were coming far away and then I thought I might fall down. Am I safe at this place?
ReplyDeleteAgnes-Tui Year 3
It was worth the long walk, pain. But as I come to this beautiful place I am left breathless by the beauty and wonder that can be found in this place. But as I start exploring, the storm comes craving for food (people)....
ReplyDeleteVioletta Swaney
Kereru Class
I was walking up the same old road like I used to everyday, whistling the same old tune. Memories came whizzing past me. I used to loved this place, now I think of it as a devilish place. The thunder clouds are coming closer and closer, then I was GONE...
ReplyDeleteBy Theresa
Kereru class
It was a hot summers day and the villagers were walking up to the towers. BOOM! suddenly thunder and lightening struck the mountains and the villagers started screaming and running for their lives.....by Finn Kakapo class
ReplyDeleteI was walking up the hill on a sunny day just as any other person would do. Suddenly the clouds came booming in I ran down the hill to a very small village to get shelter.
ReplyDeleteBy Jacob
Yr 4
Kakapo class.
I watch the dark clouds surround me as I stroll down the hill. It suddenly goes dark I scream in tears for help all I receive is a gust of wind. I hear a voice in my head you can do this, stay alive, believe in yourself.
ReplyDeleteAnahera Hailes-Paku Year 5 Kereru class
I was walking along a path that I found when I went for my morning walk. I saw a storm coming. OH NO! I was thinking how stupid I was walking along when I knew a storm was coming. HELP ME!
ReplyDeleteHannah Jones
Kakapo
Sprinting through the mountains, I try to get away. Then a magnificent village appears. I spot my persuer behind me; his face the epitome of furiosity. He isn't going to stop now. I scramble up a cliff. The rocks set loose by my feet smother my opponent.
ReplyDeleteMission accomplished.
Julia F
Kotuku class
Year 8
49 words.
I was walking through the mountains on a sunny summery day but suddenly a storm appeared!!! DON! DON! DON! DON!
ReplyDeleteI was really really scared suddenly a lightning bolt hit me and I got electrcuted. I was so lucky that I suvived
and did'nt die.
"Ahhhhhh!" The villagers cried. There were big storm clouds overhead. "Get in your houses" a man shouted. So everyone ran into their houses and turned on the fire. People thought: How did this happen? First it was a nice day and then BOOM storm clouds went over the village!
ReplyDeleteShe looked up at the spookey gray clouds.She had to leave the quiet village before the storm came.She looked down the cliff and saw a devastating seen below filled with war,blood and death.Then suddenly silence. War, blood and death gone.It was the epitome of peace.
DeleteMaddie Inglis
YR 7 kotuku class
"A STORM!!!!!! Get into your houses" yelled a man. All the kids are scared. All the mum's hugged their kids so so tight. All their homes got stuck by lightning. Everyone screamed sooooo loudly "AHHHHHHHH" A baby got struck by lightning. "Oh NO" said the family "IT'S SO BAD".
ReplyDelete"Oh no a storm"I said as I ran up the hill.I found out I wouldn't make it so I ran back down and sat up my tent.I got to sleep and when I woke up my tent was burned after that I ran to the villge.
ReplyDeleteby Matthew Winch
The first day of the year, skies sunny and blue. children playing. A silence and storm clouds roll over. I've seen those type of clouds before. Villagers disappeared in them, no-one knows where. I ran from house to house. I have to warn everyone.It is too late!
ReplyDeleteIt was time.The time of the battle. But there was no one in sight. No sound. No movement.Then BANG! I knew it was time for battle. I ran for my life, but still
ReplyDeletenothing happened. There was something wrong. What was the bang? What was the bang? CHARGE!!!
by Adam Hillis
She looked up at the spookey gray clouds. She had to leave the guiet village the storm came.She looked down the cliff and saw a devastating seen filled with war,blood and death.And then suddenly silence.
ReplyDeleteWar,blood and death gone. It was the eiptome of peace.
Maddie Inglis
Yr 7 kotuku class
Oh no a storm is coming, so I started running back to the towers. When I got there it started raining, BOOM! lighting and thunder was striking!!!
ReplyDeleteFollowing the path to the old fashion city. Clouds coming over not just ordinary clouds storm clouds. So I ran to the village to warn the villagers a storm was coming. while I was running lightning struck. I was so terrified I started running back.
ReplyDeleteExile
ReplyDeleteI stumble along the unfamiliar track, away from the sprawling concrete jungle that is, was, my home. The people I thought loved me, would never betray me, are now forced to hunt the criminal that the council believes I am. Stopping and spotting the houses above me, I smile. Hope.
Tom Schultz
Kotuku Class
Year 8
Home (By Nathanpowick)
ReplyDeleteI was succesfully running away from home and all of those hateful chores like dishes, cleaning and dusting, I hated it. Suddenly black clouds appeared out of nowhere. A storm was coming and it was coming fast. I was scared and needed shelter, badly. I turned back to safty ...... Home.
Exactly 50 words!
Escape...
ReplyDeleteI had run many miles away. Away from the town on the hill and the hate and sorrow that came with it. I had done something that could never be forgiven. And the consequences were sure to come. I did what i had to do and for that I'm proud....
My legs ached after the gruelling climb to the hospitable village. It was safe haven for people like me whose former villages were savaged by war. The homes were beautiful with lovely big gardens with children screeching with laughter in them. Then I came to my house it was amazing.
ReplyDeleteMaddie Inglis
YR 7 Kotku class
I was in my castle and i was king . I had some soup a clouds came and rained over me
ReplyDeleteso i needed more soup so i got some more and i thought about what i wanted for tea soup and i went out side and went for a walk.
Rhyn Day
Yr 8 Kotuku Class
Running from revenge. I come across a medieval castle where dead bodies lay which reminds me of what I have done. A storm brews and Im stuck between life and death. I stride to find protection. I here a ghostly whisper saying I know what you did, am i the next victim
ReplyDeleteIn a windy town far from the sea was lived an old man. one day he saw some clouds they look weid.so he went to hied he saw a mysteriose villarge it is his old town that was hieden away for 70 years.he heard a noise what.
ReplyDeletebridget 8 years old Kakapo class
Flash!! A lightning bolt struck my heart.If only I could of walked into the village ahead of me and not stood,startled by its beauty.Then I would have been near a hospital and not die here out in the jungle.
ReplyDeleteIf only I had taken the storm clouds as a clue to run and hide.
But it is too late.
Kate McCashin
yr 7
Kotuku class
I walk along the road and see big dark storm clouds, some lightening strikes a house and burns it down, everyone in the village is screaming. Then there is a big boom, everyone cries out for help, the village is starting to slide down the hill..........
ReplyDeleteI was walking along when I was blinded by the beauty. I was standing there for hours when a huge storm came .I run into the village .There was fires everywhere. everyone paniced we we where all gone forever
ReplyDeleteI stared into the haunting eyes of the mighty thunder clouds on the horizon as I ran, ran from that treacherous village. I never belonged there, I stood out from all those stuck up wealthy people. I always got made fun of. I looked down and saw it, home. Hooray!
ReplyDeleteSimonne- Kereru class
I walk along the long, windy pathway that hopefully leads to something, shelter or food. I’m so tired, so exhausted. I’m just about to fall asleep on the side of the path when I hear kicking feet and threatening voices. They take me to some mysterious place. Where?
ReplyDeleteCaitlin Waters
Year 6.
Kereru Class
I watch as we venture further and further away, my own city, my friends & family, MY LIFE leaving me. This one man has destroyed me, I know for sure im going to die! We travel down the road but the deeper we get the more im cloaked in darkness.
ReplyDeleteMegan Hay
Yr 8 Kea Class
As I walked along the rough pathway I saw the sun set slowly around me. I still had a long way until I reached my tiny village. When I got to the top I saw people rushing into there houses as dark clouds covered the sky.
ReplyDeleteJack Morris
Yr 4 Kakapo Class
I was staring out at the valley when the storm came, a lightening bolt hit the tree
ReplyDeletebehind me I stumbled down the path hoping to get to the town, just as I thought that I'd got to
safety, a few thousand volts of electricity hit me. I was dead!
I Pack fast. There is a storm coming. I run to get away from it. I shot along a track just out of town. I slip with a cry of pain. All I can do is lie there in agany and wight for the storm to take me.
ReplyDeleteSEAN POWICK
Finally I reached the town of Albany. I was glad to be there after going hard out Bear Grylls style for days in the forest. I found a hotel and stayed there for a few nights while the storm cleared up. Then I left down the small path back home.
ReplyDeleteMorgen Nimmo
yr8
kea class
Three days since the thunderous storm had struck, people are still stunned and confused. For some reason i look down and see some thing i have never seen before a tiny village!
ReplyDeleteBen (kea class)
year 8
It was dark. I could see a big sand storm was coming. Only about six houses were free of the horrible storm. I was stumbling towards the six dark shapes. Suddenly I tripped over. Now I was crawling across the sandy ground in crab style. Help! If only Batman would come!
ReplyDelete10 years ago a disasturous storm came and it distroyed our humble settlement. It wiped out the countrie side and killed many of the people that lived here. I thought it would never happen again, but I was wrong.
ReplyDeleteBy Catherine
Why was this road familiar? Screams of terror interrupted my thoughts. I looked around to locate the danger but all I see is darkness. They obviously knew what was happening or what was about to happen but I didn`t. BOOM! Lighting struck ZIZ! Then I blacked out...
ReplyDeleteSusannah
Kea class
Yr 7
I see the storm coming so i grab my stuff I need and I run down a little track I hear thunder cracks then the path came to a end. I thought i was gonna die the thunder clouds are coming closer and closer but it is to late.
ReplyDeleteJamie Mcquillan
kea class Year 7
Autumn,the best time of year but then,candy clouds came to the village.Everyone ran to there homes,but instead of thunder, it was candy.Thank you candy guy.
ReplyDeletejulian anderson kakapo class year 4.
"Thud, thud, thud." I arised thinking it was an ordinary day when I heard banging on my window, locals were telling me to get out. Emotions and perculiar feeling were approacing my head as I couldn't figure out why. Then I realised our town had been destroyed, everything had been snatched.
ReplyDeleteScarlett Burke Yr 8 (Kea)
It was a great day playing in the jungle when i noticed a storm was coming I ran as fast as i could. when a flash of lightning struck and relised i was just on time.
ReplyDelete..........By jakob
ReplyDeleteI had spent 4 demanding days staggering through undulating hills and I was almost there. My body was the epitome of fatigue and I was uncertain I would reach my destination. Abruptly I heard a rumbling sound coming from behind the hills. Suddenly an angry, ominous looking cloud shadowed the sky. A storm was coming.....
ReplyDeletePoppi Burke Year 8 Kotuku :)
As i scrambled up the rocky banks of the lost city my opponent shoots an arrow at my head and narrowly misses i rip it out of the bank and chuck it at him then I see him role down the hill i am the winner i am victorious.
ReplyDeleteby Alex
kea class
year 8
Wake Up Call
ReplyDeleteSomething woke me up, then I saw it out of the window; "Storm" I scream as loud as I could. People come running around frantically trying to prepare for the storm that was inevitably coming, and soon. There was still so much to do, but there was just so little time...
Accused of murder
ReplyDeleteAs she walked up the path she heard a yell for help she ran but when she got there and saw what lay there she gasped the king had been murdered.She looked around a little boy yelled she killed him I seen it she ran into the bush and was never seen again.
shannon
The city was deserted. Not a sound arose from the
ReplyDeletequiet streets, where the children used to play and dogs would bark.
The town was a ticking time bomb which would soon be ready to erupt.
Maybe 2012 really is the year when the world ends?
It's up to you....
Sian Gallagher ~ Year 8 (Kea class)
I was walking up the spur it was a warm summers day the oak leaves rustling in the wind the all of a sudden i heard a low rumbling sound and knew the village was doomed
ReplyDeleteI look up to the magnificent view of the villages hills to see thick, black thunder clouds rolling over the hill. As I warn everyone around me, mixed emotions were going through me head, but there was little time, I had to get out of here.
ReplyDeleteNobody comes, nobody goes, its been this way forever. The path out is small and overgrown. Suddenly I hear a voice boom, the epitome of anger, "No-one ever leaves, no-one is allowed to leave". I sprint out and away down the path until I can't run any further...safe.
ReplyDeleteI walk the muddy track. My city looks amazing from up here. Then I see Magic Castle. Rain, thunder and lightning strike, this is the worst that can happen in Newland. I ran for help and to alert everyone, there was nothing left, everyone’s survival is a priority to me.
ReplyDeleteYr5
Kereru class
Dylan Didi
Blinding, black clouds engulf the city in rage. BANG! Off goes a gun. I had to get down there and save them because that was my job. I have to get there fast or no-one will be able to see again.
ReplyDeleteBy Grace - Kea
I sit peering through my ripped curtain not able to move. The idea of a hurricane sent my head spinning. I run outside and collapse into a bed of freshly mowed grass. I wrap my nervous fingers around a patch of grass ripping fruiously and threw it.
ReplyDeleteAs I walk along The Path Of Peanut Butter I look up at the Kingdom Of Fried Eggs towering above me. Mr Bennidict called from his toast tower,
ReplyDelete" Watch out!" I look up at the Holladaise clouds and wonder if I will make it through The Valley Of Breakfast.
By Alisha
Year 6
Weka class
Peering down to the village below wondering if i should attack village and make sure the bandits never try to burn down our kingdom and kidnap our princess again or maybe i should just stay and let the water that the clouds are bringing fluid over the village below
ReplyDeleteThere once was a road that led to a mysterious city with wild plants on a magnificent mountain. Poppe were rampaging through the city as the wild things creeped over the land. The hid because they were too scared to fight. The wild reached the city and ate them all.
ReplyDeleteBOOM! I hear a sound in the distance and see dark black clouds. What is happening I ask myself. I hear someone yellig
ReplyDelete'We are under attack!!' It is a bomb. It must be.
I hide and hope everyone is ok. Everything around me is pitch black.
Taneeka Lewis
Keruru Class
Year 5
Horay! I found were I was born. "Help" said the Presidant. "We are under attack! Get some water."
ReplyDeleteFire Fire Boom a Cannonball blasted the tank. "Retreat! Retreat!" shouted the Baddie.
By Oliver Lewis, Pikwakawaka
What a loveley view I can see. Up in the sky I saw stormy back clouds rolling in fast. People were screaming
ReplyDelete'Oh no there is a storm coming!'
'Help me, my baby is stuck up in the tree!'
'WWAAAAA!' The babies cries filled my ears.
I saved her just on time.
Jasmine Barney
Year 3
Piwakawaka class
Jasmine is a year 2 sorry
DeleteSTORM!!!
ReplyDeleteWalking down the road I saw big roads in the distance. They came closer very fast. Quickly I ran back to our village to warn the people. The clouds looked threateningly big. Our houses were standing on the top f the mountain so we had to close all the windows and doors.
Isaac Lewis
tui class
year 2
We've been running for so long now, gleaming from the darkness there's a town further up the road maybe they'll give us a place to stay and rest. We draw closer I see it the same darkness we've been running from. We have to warn them before its too late, is anywhere safe?
ReplyDeleteAbby Haines-Bellamy
Kea class
Year 8
*fleeing from the darkness
ReplyDeleteAbby
my knife smashes all the branches to bits and in the distance, I see a white castle ahead of me.As I run into the house I wonder what I'll see...
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