I was jumping along the edge of the moon as I came across a ghost, the ghost lance Armstrong. It kept coming toward me and I edged closer to the edge until I fell, my oxygen ran out but one thing I know, I never returned to earth.
I was travelling in my spaceship to the moon. I was a physiccist studying the moon on my adventurous discoveries about the earth. I had a buddy to help me named Phil , he is very technical. I can't wait until I discover something new.
As i gaze into the endless universe know'n as space, i call to my partner. He comes bouncing towards me, i point to an unknowen galaxy. We record our sighting. When we get back to NASA the scientists are amazed of our finding....
My first step on the moon...I have been waiting anxiously for this moment my whole life. Mixed emotions are racing through me. Earth; big and beautiful, an amazing site. Each step I take, becomes bigger and bigger in result of no gravity. Ideas are running through my head about what would happen when I arrive back on Earth. How would this change my future?
As me and my partner,Mordecai Alby, were scouring the planet,Scarlett when we saw and odd shape, I realised it was a alien.It said its name was Zork and he lead us to the aliens city,Quadup, and showed us the wonders.We told NASA and became famous.
I take one innocent step at a time on the jagged moon I lock my eyes on the cloudy earth hoping to never go back. The stars drown out the black sky and the planets glow graciously. I never want to go home.
(Dramatic music) I was walking down the steps of apollo 11 with the flag in my hand.I take my first step on the moon , ONE SMALL STEP FOR MAN IS A GIANT LEAP FOR MANKIND then I planted the flag. I hear a noise I turned and saw .........
My home planet looms below me and i think about what i am doing, that i am risking my life to do this one thing, to get it as i jump towards it some thing grabs me it huts, it puls i scream i yell but no one hears me.
My heads spinning with wonderful thoughts as one step at a time, I glide across the moon, twinkling stars stare right back at me through my sole I gaze across the planets each with its very own cover and I know that to never judge a book by its cover.....
This new planet amazed me i felt like i was a giant looming over earths atmosphere. A single star shot past and i suddenly felt free like i could do anything, it inspired me to take a leap of faith. My arms rose unconsciously upwards and i took of my helmet.....
Years ago the sun exploded.Earth and all its people, every living thing was shipped off to live on another planet,a planet with sustainable life. This planet was called vita which meant life in Latin, our new language. Life had been a struggle since then.There was no hope.......
Two men went to the moon. They were the fist people on the moon. They could have seen the wold. I would had been happy if i was one of the fist people on the moon. I could see my house from here.My famliy will be happy with me.
"Four" said John. "Watch out" I said " you nearly hit me on the head". John and Ben have entered the Galactic Golf Tournament, this year it is being played on the moon. "It's really hard, the golf balls keep floating away, because there is no gravity on the moon, " I said.
I want to get closer...climbing up the snowy mountain...I might be able to jump from here to moldy cheese planet...my mate said "no I'm not going with you, you'r on your own"..But we know we aren't on our own as we have God in our lives.
I look down at earth now the only planet with life on it but compared to the other planets all I can see is buildings now empty space anymore. The stars i can almost touch they are glimmering in the suns heat. I almost died but it was worth it.
I see my old world feeling terrible. It is full of buildings i can't see any open space. I come to the dark part of the moon where I belong. The sun is so hot im sweating also i can almost touch those glimmering stars I do and....
We have been searching for a deadly alien it destroyed my home planet Earth. I stare at the blue water and the brown lands full of DISTRUCTION!!! My patner said "lets go". Tears come rolling down my eyes this is the last time I will see the planet Earth.
I was having a birthday party on the moon when this silly asteroid came towards me. It hit me right in the noggin. My best friend was laughing her head off, So I threw the asteroid at her. We were playing that game when the asteroid cant touch the ground.
"I've always wanted to go to space now I'm here on the moon". Then I wonder how did I get here. I remember that one night. I was just a girl sitting on the grass looking at the stars saying one day i'll be there on the moon.
I was flying in my rocket, then I jumped out and i had landed on the moon. There seemed to be but something wrong, I saw aliens I scream help! But there is no-one to help me, my rockets broken down, what do I do? By Lucas
I had won a trip to space, I was with my partner Bob, he had been to space before. I can see earth, it feels like I have run away from home. Then Bob yells the key to the rocket is starting to float away, we try to jump for it but we can't get it, will we be lost in space forever?
Holy moly is that a meteor i wonder desperately? "JONOTHAN" I scream sprinting towards my helpless friend. The meteor spinning faster than ever hurls our rocket to one side i throw my heavy body on top of his and whisper into his ear "if this is where we die atleast our dream came true".
oh yes im here on the moon after all these years i scream excited! i think im gonna burst thats how excited i am! oh my godness is that a alien ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH i scream scared it was green and ugly with countless amount of eyes!
Finally we made it.We're hungry and we are sad to leave our family behind.But we had no choice because there is a devastating invasion.We stared at earth for a long time hoping the reign of terror would stop.But no it has just begun.
Looking at the Earth on the moon is probably the most amazing experience you could ever do. Looking at all the colours and wonders of our solar system. All you can do is stare in awe at the most beautiful sphere called Earth.
It's finally payed off, the early morning starts and weeks of training, has landed me here... The dusty snow like grounds and the stars seen a million miles way. Your just floating there like life has never been as amazing before, where else could you be but on the moon.
The earth was about to end I had flown away to the moon to see the earth explode. 5,4,3,2,1 BOOM!!! Gone I was the only living thing in the universe, unless, ALIENS! I was off to find a new life on mars!
I look at the the sudden mist of misery swoop past as the clouds of revenge poors over me. OK fine i did it but i didnt mean to i was just leaning back in the towns rocket and the next thing i know CHUGGA CHUG BANG!!! the next thing i knew i was on my way to the moon!
50 Word short Story – Year 2 – Piwakawaka Class Jasmine Barney – Space Picture – 55 words.
Well ! What an amazing planet. Gemma, come and look at this planet. Let’s get into our rocket ship. 5,4, 3, 2, 1 ... Blast off. We’re off looking at those pretty planets. Sorry, but it’s going to be a bumpy ride! “Can you please go slower” Emma. . “Oh, please help me”, Peter said. “I’m going to be sick. Help!”.
50 Word Short Story. Year 6 – Weka Class. Alisha Lewis – Underwater Picture – 49 words
“I see something!”, I shouted excitedly. It was shiny and bright golden coloured. My mate Mark grabbed it with the large pincers in front of the ship and pulled it inside. We had found it. Jackpot! They call it the Golden Jewel of the sea. We will be rich.
50 Word Short Story – Year 6 – Weka Class Alisha Lewis – Space Picture – 49 words
We just landed on the moon, Neil Armstrong and I. Why did he step here first, and get all the credit! “Bet they’r having McDonalds for dinner today”, Neil said trying to make a joke. It didn’t work. “I never want to go home”, I muttered quietly to myself.
50 Word Short Story – Year 3 – Piwakawaka Class Oliver Lewis – Space Picture – 49 words
Blast off! I’ve blasted off into space. Arrrrr. I am getting sucked into the black hole. I feel sick. I am going so fast that I’m getting dizzy. Now we are through it luckily. Wow! We are at Venus now. What a beautify planet. I need my sunglasses now.
50 Word Short Story – Year 2 – Tui Class Isaac Lewis – Space Picture – 45 words.
Wow. My first day on the moon! How amazing is that. I can see earth the light of earth. The moon looks empty. There are holes and rocks. I don’t see roads with cars of people. There is nobody here. It is all very quiet.;
50 Word Short story – Year 5 Kereru Class Taneeka Lewis – Space Picture – 59 words
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 – Blast off. Boom, we took off into space. The sky turned black. I looked out of the window. We had landed on the moon. I heard my Fred asking: “Is the moon made out of cheese. I got out of the spaceship and looked at the beautiful world earth.
Title: 2149 Walking on the Moon, searching for evidence showing if the Earth and the Moon are going to be destroyed. Then I get called from my friend who joined me. I saw a little star but it got as big as anything could. I’m blinded from the light.
I miss home. I've traveled for a while just to see earth spin. " Bad news Captain. This is the end," said Andrew. I turned and saw the sun. Was I continuing in space forever? Bye Home...
I was jumping along the edge of the moon as I came across a ghost, the ghost lance Armstrong. It kept coming toward me and I edged closer to the edge until I fell, my oxygen ran out but one thing I know, I never returned to earth.
ReplyDeleteSimonne- Kereru class
whoops I mean Neil Armstrong.
DeleteI was in my space ship when I arrived on the moon for a party. I could see earth miles away I desperatly wanted to go home.
ReplyDeleteKakapo class
I was travelling in my spaceship to the moon. I was a physiccist studying the moon on my adventurous discoveries about the earth. I had a buddy to help me named Phil , he is very technical. I can't wait until I discover something new.
ReplyDeleteJacob Liddle
Kakapo class
YR 4.
As i gaze into the endless universe know'n as space, i call to my partner. He comes bouncing towards me, i point to an unknowen galaxy. We record our sighting. When we get back to NASA the scientists are amazed of our finding....
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My first step on the moon...I have been waiting anxiously for this moment my whole life. Mixed emotions are racing through me. Earth; big and beautiful, an amazing site. Each step I take, becomes bigger and bigger in result of no gravity. Ideas are running through my head about what would happen when I arrive back on Earth. How would this change my future?
ReplyDeleteAs me and my partner,Mordecai Alby, were scouring the planet,Scarlett when we saw and odd shape, I realised it was a alien.It said its name was Zork and he lead us to the aliens city,Quadup, and showed us the wonders.We told NASA and became famous.
ReplyDeleteCeanna Bolton
Kakapo Class
Yr 4 >:D XD :P
I take one innocent step at a time on the jagged moon I lock my eyes on the cloudy earth hoping to never go back. The stars drown out the black sky and the planets glow graciously. I never want to go home.
ReplyDelete(Dramatic music) I was walking down the steps of apollo 11 with the flag in my hand.I take my first step on the moon , ONE SMALL STEP FOR MAN IS A GIANT LEAP FOR MANKIND then I planted the flag. I hear a noise I turned and saw .........
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DeleteIm antony
DeleteMy home planet looms below me and i think about what i am doing, that i am risking my life to do this one thing, to get it as i jump towards it some thing grabs me it huts, it puls i scream i yell but no one hears me.
ReplyDeleteMy heads spinning with wonderful thoughts as one step at a time, I glide across the moon, twinkling stars stare right back at me through my sole I gaze across the planets each with its very own cover and I know that to never judge a book by its cover.....
ReplyDeleteThis new planet amazed me i felt like i was a giant looming over earths atmosphere. A single star shot past and i suddenly felt free like i could do anything, it inspired me to take a leap of faith. My arms rose unconsciously upwards and i took of my helmet.....
ReplyDeleteYears ago the sun exploded.Earth and all its people, every living thing was shipped off to live on another planet,a planet with sustainable life. This planet was called vita which meant life in Latin, our new language. Life had been a struggle since then.There was no hope.......
ReplyDeleteTwo men went to the moon. They were the fist people on the moon. They could have seen the wold. I would had been happy if i was one of the fist people on the moon. I could see my house from here.My famliy will be happy with me.
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year two
tui
"Four" said John. "Watch out" I said " you nearly hit me on the head". John and Ben have entered the Galactic Golf Tournament, this year it is being played on the moon.
ReplyDelete"It's really hard, the golf balls keep floating away, because there is no gravity on the moon, " I said.
Ben Rodgers
year 4
Kakapo
I want to get closer...climbing up the snowy mountain...I might be able to jump from here to moldy cheese planet...my mate said "no I'm not going with you, you'r on your own"..But we know we aren't on our own as we have God in our lives.
ReplyDeleteI look down at earth now the only planet with life on it but compared to the other planets all I can see is buildings now empty space anymore. The stars i can almost touch they are glimmering in the suns heat. I almost died but it was worth it.
ReplyDeleteAria Healey (kereru)
"No empty space anymore" is surposed to be there not "now empty space anymore" sorry
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DeleteI see my old world feeling terrible. It is full of buildings i can't see any open space. I come to the dark part of the moon where I belong. The sun is so hot im sweating also i can almost touch those glimmering stars I do and....
ReplyDeleteAria Healey (Kereru Class)
We have been searching for a deadly alien it destroyed my home planet Earth. I stare at the blue water and the brown lands full of DISTRUCTION!!! My patner said "lets go". Tears come rolling down my eyes this is the last time I will see the planet Earth.
ReplyDeleteMaximus Curry
(kereru class) Year 6
I was having a birthday party on the moon when this silly asteroid came towards me. It hit me right in the noggin.
ReplyDeleteMy best friend was laughing her head off, So I threw the asteroid at her. We were playing that game when the asteroid cant touch the ground.
I love your story Caitlin!
DeleteMemories!!!
ReplyDelete"I've always wanted to go to space now I'm here on the moon". Then I wonder how did I get here. I remember that one night. I was just a girl sitting on the grass looking at the stars saying one day i'll be there on the moon.
Anahera Hailes-Paku
Kereru Class
Year 5
I was flying in my rocket, then I jumped out and i had landed on the moon. There seemed to be but something wrong, I saw aliens I scream help! But there is no-one to help me, my rockets broken down, what do I do?
ReplyDeleteBy Lucas
I had won a trip to space, I was with my partner Bob, he had been to space before. I can see earth, it feels like I have run away from home. Then Bob yells the key to the rocket is starting to float away, we try to jump for it but we can't get it, will we be lost in space forever?
ReplyDeleteHoly moly is that a meteor i wonder desperately? "JONOTHAN" I scream sprinting towards my helpless friend. The meteor spinning faster than ever hurls our rocket to one side i throw my heavy body on top of his and whisper into his ear "if this is where we die atleast our dream came true".
ReplyDeleteShannay
(weka class)
Cool story Shannay
Deleteoh yes im here on the moon after all these years i scream excited! i think im gonna burst thats how excited i am! oh my godness is that a alien ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH i scream scared it was green and ugly with countless amount of eyes!
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Finally we made it.We're hungry and we are sad to leave our family behind.But we had no choice because there is a devastating invasion.We stared at earth for a long time hoping the reign of terror would stop.But no it has just begun.
ReplyDeleteMarcus weka class
Looking at the Earth on the moon is probably the most amazing experience you could ever do. Looking at all the colours and wonders of our solar system. All you can do is stare in awe at the most beautiful sphere called Earth.
ReplyDeleteIt's finally payed off, the early morning starts and weeks of training, has landed me here... The dusty snow like grounds and the stars seen a million miles way. Your just floating there like life has never been as amazing before, where else could you be but on the moon.
ReplyDeleteMegan Hay
Kea Class Yr 8
2012
ReplyDeleteThe earth was about to end I had flown away to the moon to see the earth explode. 5,4,3,2,1 BOOM!!! Gone I was the only living thing in the universe, unless, ALIENS!
I was off to find a new life on mars!
Simonne- kereru class
I look at the the sudden mist of misery swoop past as the clouds of revenge poors over me. OK fine i did it but i didnt mean to i was just leaning back in the towns rocket and the next thing i know CHUGGA CHUG BANG!!!
ReplyDeletethe next thing i knew i was on my way to the moon!
p.s that was shannays short short story
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ReplyDeleteJasmine Barney – Space Picture – 55 words.
Well ! What an amazing planet. Gemma, come and look at this planet. Let’s get into our rocket ship. 5,4, 3, 2, 1 ... Blast off. We’re off looking at those pretty planets. Sorry, but it’s going to be a bumpy ride!
“Can you please go slower” Emma. .
“Oh, please help me”, Peter said. “I’m going to be sick. Help!”.
50 Word Short Story. Year 6 – Weka Class.
ReplyDeleteAlisha Lewis – Underwater Picture – 49 words
“I see something!”, I shouted excitedly. It was shiny and bright golden coloured. My mate Mark grabbed it with the large pincers in front of the ship and pulled it inside.
We had found it. Jackpot! They call it the Golden Jewel of the sea. We will be rich.
50 Word Short Story – Year 6 – Weka Class
ReplyDeleteAlisha Lewis – Space Picture – 49 words
We just landed on the moon, Neil Armstrong and I. Why did he step here first, and get all the credit!
“Bet they’r having McDonalds for dinner today”, Neil said trying to make a joke. It didn’t work. “I never want to go home”, I muttered quietly to myself.
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ReplyDeleteOliver Lewis – Space Picture – 49 words
Blast off! I’ve blasted off into space. Arrrrr. I am getting sucked into the black hole. I feel sick. I am going so fast that I’m getting dizzy.
Now we are through it luckily. Wow! We are at Venus now. What a beautify planet.
I need my sunglasses now.
50 Word Short Story – Year 2 – Tui Class
ReplyDeleteIsaac Lewis – Space Picture – 45 words.
Wow. My first day on the moon! How amazing is that. I can see earth the light of earth. The moon looks empty. There are holes and rocks. I don’t see roads with cars of people. There is nobody here. It is all very quiet.;
50 Word Short story – Year 5 Kereru Class
ReplyDeleteTaneeka Lewis – Space Picture – 59 words
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 – Blast off. Boom, we took off into space. The sky turned black. I looked out of the window. We had landed on the moon. I heard my Fred asking: “Is the moon made out of cheese. I got out of the spaceship and looked at the beautiful world earth.
Title: 2149
ReplyDeleteWalking on the Moon, searching for evidence showing if the Earth and the Moon are going to be destroyed. Then I get called from my friend who joined me. I saw a little star but it got as big as anything could. I’m blinded from the light.
Year 5
Kereru Class
Dylan Didi
CONTINUING IN SPACE
ReplyDeleteI miss home. I've traveled for a while just to see earth spin.
" Bad news Captain. This is the end," said Andrew. I turned and saw the sun.
Was I continuing in space forever?
Bye Home...
Xanthe Wardle
Weka Class
Year 5. ! @ # $ % ^ & * ( )
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