As we sweep through the murky water looking for the mythiccal treasure of red beard. We see many golden jellyfish. As the rusted claws of the submarine dig into the light-brown sand, we see something shine, could it be!? Our eyes glow with greed,I smile evilly... Now its mine!
Going back to the same old place for the fifth time. I was terrified there are sharks staring at me. There are jellyfish circling me.As the same old digging legs dig into the rusty sand. wait i think i can see the sun floating in the sea.
Splash! We submerge into the misty black sea our search find the statue of liberty I only monitor the damage. Suddenly out of no where comes a swam of yellow jellyfish they rip at our sub "high damage" I race to the back of the sub and eject. BOOM! The submarine expolodes underneath me. What were those jellyfish?! Zac
I continue through my ordinary day. Something grabs me by the tail I manage to wriggle free. As I swim away I stop, look back I float there shocked. The person in it gives me an evil glare but I shrink in with a school of fish and swim away.
Who lives in a pineapple under the sea? ME!! And I'm out in my submarine looking for the, well, what I think is the most rare thing in the world. O my gosh! There it is! The yellow jelly fish I've been looking for my whole life. YES!! I'm rich...
Somethings different about this sea. I know it's those golden glimmering funny jellyfish and a school of blue shiny playful fish. The sun is shimmering down gold on the sea. I'm breathless a red fish looks startled at me this means only one thing... This is the sea of wonders...
As I go deeper and deeper into the sea, I see one, two no three!!! Small little lights shinning through the pitch black sea. What is it? Could this, could this be the last few golden jelly fish? An evil grin appears onto my face, this is it, I'm rich!!!!
As i go deeper into the ocean i could see fish swimming ferociously as if something is chasing them. But the out of nowhere i saw a creature jump onto my submarine. I tried to start the veichele but it has destroyed the main engine. Is this the end? weka class year 6
I was travelling through the Atlantic Ocean in my submarine, when suddenly yellow jellyfish started to croud around me like a full rugby field. One had managed to get into my submarine and it stung me,Ouch that really hurt.
I was in my submarine, suddenly bright yellow jellyfish came towards me, they wanted to sting me. I knew they didn't want me in their territory, all I was doing was trying to find the famous white shark.
Wow,I'm amazed is this really it? I forced the controls down...Everything is so quiet. I look out the window of the submarine as I gaze at the crystal clear ocean water, jelly fish surround the submarine,I start to force the controls up but its to late....
As I jumped off the ragged rocks I landed in my rusty old submarine. I was off to find the lost treasure of Atlantis. When all of a sudden a jellyfish shocked my submarine and everything in the ship froze. I was trapped at the bottom of the ocean.
I plunged my old submarine into the cool water. I was on a mission. I was determind to find terasure. Suddenly I thought I saw some terasure! No just some junk. Jellyfish were coming closer. That's the end of me. I hoped that one day I would find some treasure.
I freeze. I’m petrified. Impossibly far away from the comfort of reality. Since the fish started disappearing, dad has become obsessed with finding the cause. And now we’ve found it. After years of searching, we’ve found it. My skin crawls and my blood turns icy cold as it emerges from the darkest depths of the ocean...
"Arrrhhh!" I shouted."I've been down here for thousands of years looking for the....." I paused in excitment."The long lost treasure of my great grandad LIAM" I went out of the submarine to grab the fascinating treasure until a swarm of jellyfish came."ZZZZZZ!" I lay there,dead...
"Look" whispers dad.I read The newspaper headline,'SUNKEN SUB' Shocked, i race down to the docs and throw myself into the icy water, I swim for miles and miles until my Muscles burn with pain.This is the spot i think to myself, Dunking my head below the surface...
I got into my submarine then BANG CRASH AHAH what was that I said. My family ran to me I went under then the sea was crashing like a marching band. My ship was gone I tried to get my diving suit but it was to late DUN DUN DUN!
I scream out to my father, But it's too late. The submarine was already filled with water. I try to swim up to the surface but the pressure of the water is too strong. This is where I'll die, on the ocean's floor. With tears still in my shut eyes.
I'm in the Atlantic Ocean. Octopus are surrounding me. I know one has swallowed the water ruby. I used the two claws to get them. But it was too late.....by daniel hillis.
I'm going to be rich!! Look at the golden jelly fish. I hop out of the submarine with my net. Got them! I hop back in and put them into a bag. I go back out. I'm looking for treasure so I dig. I am rich with gold.
As the fog of my minty breath covers the glass windows my mind collapsed with only one thought in my head 21 GOLD. After all these years of mystery and uncertainty these mythical creatures of the deep came to ME AND ONLY ME.
When the war all stared these to mean went in to a submarine.They where trying to get to gold land then FLICK!something hit the window, it was gold.So they got out in a hurry,FLASH!it got to bright to see..I knew that i died by Finn Kakapo class
The Submarine At the bottom of the green slimy ocean I saw seaweed stroking our submarine. Fish were leaping in and out of the sea. I hid in a corner of the submarine. I held onto a smooth metal rail. Then a light flashed. I looked up. Everything was gone. Hannah Scott Year 3 Whio class
Underwater Deep under the sparkling blue sea, a submarine with two men inside it was stuck on the ocean floor. I heard a faint yell for help. I couldn't figure out what to do. Suddenly the water broke the glass and the men drowned. I felt miserable. Mikayla Homesley Year 3 Whio class
I was having a drive in my submarine OH NO my air was running out. Suddenly I arrived at Bikini Bottom. Then I saw Spongebob Squarepants with friends WOW. We had so much fun together so I stayed and had lunch at the Krusty Krab. YUM
Deep down on the surface of the ocean in my little subarine.I took a peak outside the window all I could see was fish.Wait a second whats that the most shinyest thing iv'e ever seen in my life.I could be famous but how to get out there.
As I drith deeper and deeper into these clear green waters I see something I have never seen before. Dazzling gold jellyfish are circling my submarine. Theen suddenly I hear a zap and a snap. the submarine is sinking I need to get out fast.
Two months I've been here. Nearly out of oxygen and the submarine is broken. I have nothing to take back to the science lab. I am all alone with nothing but fish to amuse me. No food, no water. What to do, where to go. Help!
THE HUMAN'S FIRST SUBMARINE. There was an army submarine. The submarine was looking for treasure. The treasure was diamonds and jewellery. The submarine has tentacles and crab claws.there are three jelly fish. The jelly fish can light up. I'm trying to survive in this dangerous water. I hope I will survive.
We were underwater 250 miles under and we were doing our best to find a rare creature that if you touch it you will die. We spotted the creature this animal was as deadly as a jellyfish, the captain held the creature. It was to late the captain was dead as a doorknob.
Today was incredible. My Grandfather told me about a day of death but still life. A long Submarine traveled the seas. Grandaddy saw eletric fish and jellyfish as well as crabs and the sub acted like a crab too! Suddenly BOOM! The window broke! Did he survive? He did!
( V ) ( ' ' ) BUNNY BEAR ALERT!! OVER THERE <-!!! (:) (:)
In the deeps of the cold winter sea, me and my crew are searching for the famous diamond shark. Soon we see a big glow. It is, the diamond shark! Finally! We grab it and kill it, but how will we get back up? Oh no!!!!
I was in my submarine and it started rocking. I then relised it was an earthquake which could cause a tsunami. I then got taken under by the orce of the tsunami. I found myself unconscious in the middle of nowhere. I woke up...... Where was I. Know one new........
" Captain's log 65 million years BC" Ben Rodgers on the time travelling submarine "The Jellyfish" , chief archaeologist at Nelson Museum reporting my first sighting of a mosasaur . It's really big, it's swimming fast, it appears to be hunting an orthocone. Dang, I must return to base to refill my airtanks.
Oh! The great gold jellyfish,I watch the animal swim past the submarine. Then that is the moment when I saw the gloomy shadow I got closer and BOOM I lay unconscious. I woke up, the water was different, where was I?
Ready to give up, I travel through the shimmering turquoise waters, I catch a glimpse of what I've spent my whole life looking for. Under the ruins of old pieces, I see the shimmer of gold through he thin sand and clench onto it with my claws. Jumping with joy I realise I've found something that could change the world forever...
There it was the lost temple. "Wow look at the art work" said Kim. As we looked around the corner and there it lay, a six foot sub with two flesh eaten people. Then kaboom out of the wall a humungous meat eating stingray appeared and rip ahh my leg...
I sit wondering, not believing where I am right now. Lurking further into the depths of the mystical waters I search for prized jewels. Suddenly a black figure strikes from behind. I make out the beast before fear drowns me. I scramble to find air but everything goes dark...
As I sat in my crab mobile I saw some yellow jellyfish surrounding me. My friend was so scared he tried to jump out. It took all my strength to hold him back but what will become of us if they attack.
As officer Craig Spalding looked out of his porthole, he saw a submarine, but this was no ordinary submarine. It looked like some mythical object from 1 hundred years ago.There were little golden fish swimming around the submarine. Suddenly the submarine started turning around and then, to Spalding's horror...
As we headed down to the bottom of the ocean...these man-eating jellyfish started to eat through my submarine...I tried not to panic...but i started to scream. AHHHH were going to die... Captain Rogers tried to get his swim suit on... but it was to late!...clink
One day two men hop into there submarine then they went a head. the two men stop four a snake then they went a head. Then the men and the submarine stop there was a big rock and on it was gold every where the two men got out on to the rock and collected so much gold and the two men came home rich the end.
I looked around at what seemed to be the last of our egsistince .A giant machine ( I think it's called it a submerine, ) had huge claws scooping up the sand and big tenticle things draining water. It felt like it was the end of the world,but we're only fish.
The Jellyfish 3000 was gliding across the caspian sea.I flicked the switch and pulled the throttle.The engine roared as I started to pick up speed.BANG!! The engine stopped. I tried to pull up, but it did not work.I was doomed.......
Underwater! I steered my boat out of the clear, see-through lake where my hometown used to be. I looked behind me. Should I really be doing this? Leaving my family doesn't sound right. But I had to. A huge war was coming. How could I? I had to choose ... Josephine Hills Year 3 Whio class
We are in a rusty submerine heading towards war land. Three purple jellyfish are surrouning us. I hope where safe! The sharp tentacles of the submerine will protect me. And I hope we don't get stuk in the weeds. I wish my family could be close to me.
I'm under water. The submarine is driving very fast. What is that? I cannot see it properly. Just then the engine stopped. Have I crashed into an iceberg? I think so. I sit there. I can't say a word. What shall i do? Oh know what's happening.
The Mystical creatures float fluently through the gentle waters of the atlantic. But as the big submarine dominates the water the mystical creatures are now breathless and are racing towards the under water currents where people go but never return.
I stare out into the deep blue sea, wondering what lies ahead. Suddenly I see something shimering in the water, it reminds me of something that happened a long time ago something strange and eerie, something I still struggle to find an answer to.....
Underwater We are in a rusty submarine heading towards war land. Three purple, poisonous jellyfish are surrounding us. I hope we are safe! The sharp tentacles of the submarine will protect me. I hope we don't get stuck in the weeds. I wish my family could be close to me.
Treasure! I'm in a submarine looking for the treasure of the waves, which was found by a young suffer who had no surf, but he found this gold necklace and wore it as a good luck charm. Others think it's a myth or legend but I believe...
The greatest discovery goes to the to the greatest disaster some where in asia two captains found poseidons treasure suddenely the engine fell silent.....we were stuck.
I pack my bags and off i go for an adventure. In my submarine i go under the water and I see something in the distance what is that its coming closer and closer NO!!!!!!!
Oh no I'm trapped. What do I do. I'm stuck I can't get out of my submarine. Isn't it orking the sea monster is coming, but when I shut my eyes it will be gone. First when I close my eyes and could to ten and open my eyes its gone.
As I creep stealthily through the shallows in the thick, almost gelatinous water, I can't help but believe that someone has shadowed me here, even though I have taken precautions against this exact situation occurring. I freeze as I hear a thud on top of the boat. I am found.
I stare out of the foggy window of the submarine. I only have one thing on my mind. War. Am I going die or am or am I going to survive? Suddenly I see a shadow it's a shark; now I know I'm not going to survive.
"Quick" I yelled! " we will never get out alive if we don't hurry up!" Finally we finished repearing the broken submarine. As we floated to the surface I felt the epitome of relief. "YAY we survived" I yelled but what i really want to know is how did it happen?...
A leak it was coming from one of the valves. I don`t know what to do I payed good money to escape in this submarine but now my life is at stake. As the submarine fulled with water, I felt my life draining away just as they got me... By Susannah Kea class Yr 7
This is by Wouter Froeling. I live under water and I see jellyfish and fish. Just that normal stuff. Then I turned on my Submarine treasure finder and there it lay my only treasure that I had ever found. I look around at my Submarine in the blue water and crabbed the treasure. What now? I got the treasure.........
A i go deeper and deeper into the grey murky water my rustey old submarine starts to shake and i see something shiny first i thought it was treasure but no it was the golden jelly fish and they were all a round me. What now? i found the golden jellyfish.
Wouter Froeling. I live under water and I see jellyfish and fish. Just that normal stuff.Then I turned my Submarine treasure finder on and there it lay my only treasure that I had ever found. I looked around at my Submarine in the blue water and grabbed the treasure! What now? I have got the treasure...............
I was in my 50 million dollar submarine. As soon as I hop in it starts putting , putt , putt ,putt.I suudenly stop.I was sinking I was sinking fast.I was about to die suddenly I woke it was all a dream.
I was traveling in my submarine for the lost treasure of Atlantis when suddenly golden jelly fish were surrounding me. I knew I was close to Atlantis so I charged through the jelly fish to get to the lost treasure. BY Ceanna Kakapo YR 4 :) ;) <:0 >:D XD <:( :[) :)>
"Oh barnicals"! The chubby, stocky man from the local chippy said he ran out of fish. So I drifted in my green submarine to catch my own fish. "BINGO"! A Red Snapper was right in front of me. My mechanical tentacles reached out and grabbed the fish. Fish problem solved!
World War 2's going on up there. I had to escape. But now I'm stuck down here in this darned tincan called a submarine! I'm getting worried. What if my food runs out or someone finds me? But worst of all, what if I DIE?
I pulled up the controls and tried to pick up the green stone. I want it. I started thrashing round knocking my team mate in the nose. Suddenly there was a scream from behind. I didn't know that water was coming through the crack. I couldn't breath. I was stuck lying there helplessly.
In the deep dark murky waters below lurks a cold mechanical beast searching for anything to capture, to feed on. Inside the monster is a human. This human pilots the beast towards its prey and as soon as the monster is near its prey it launches itself and! dead silence.
Time to go I said good bye to my family I wave good bye and jump in and go down it got it darker and darker and darker and boom boom boom I hit the botten of the sea and then I see a family of school fish it lookes like me when I was at school bad times bad times then back I go.
I was in my submarine and then SCREECHHHHH!!! I saw an amazing sight of a jellyfish and then I recognized this. It was a special gold jellyfish that hasn’t been spotted for 100 years. I rushed to get my diving gear, but then thump it was an octopus, DOOM, HELP.
We are on the search for the source the of the snapper invasion that has been covering our shores for the last fortnight or so. As we search the ocean floor, we come across three golden jellyfish, people have not seen them for over 100 years, they were amazing.
You never know what under the sea would look like unless you went down yourself in a rusty, old submarine. There are fish and creatures of some sort in all different colours, sizes and shapes. All of a sudden I'm swung back to reality as my sister screams me awake.
oh,hello jellyfish what a minute its going to break the glass!*code red code red*oh no help help!I had a good life.waa waa waa.well this is It im going to die.wait a minute this is a dream. by matthew
I watch as the rusted claw digs into the sand and swarms of pretty yellow jellyfish surround my submarine.All of a sudden they scatter a bigger,badder an octopus its horrible arms wrap around the submarine.I scream in terror as the submarine breaks.I'm alive I scream.
Once upon a time two men lived in a creepy crawlly beetle submarine, as they used their tenticles to catch golden glowing jellyfish to light the way to the treasure...oh no look out.... there is a great white shark just up in front of us ...what shall we do!
As I open my mouth my cold minty breath hovers over the glass windows... After all these years of mystery and uncertainty, searching under water, they come to me and only me what do I do Next with these Mythical Creatures of the Deep
The cold water raps my ankles sending stingy tingles through my icey spine, i think about it, the man whose been missing for years in a sub in this ocean floor sent me worried and dizzy. i wonder what hes been looking for all these years dimands rubys nobody knows!
Die or live Sam got into his banana split submarine and it can come alive when you go down in the water. Then he went down, down right to the smooth soft sand. Eek, eek the submarine was dead. Then a bright jellyfish light came to sting Sam. What will happen next?
There was a mysterious submarine. As it creeped along the bottom of the ocean the pliot looked out the window and saw some glowing jellyfish and a red fish. The pilot could not stay under water for too long as he was running out fo air. Lily (Room Weka)
I was in my submarine,me,jake and ladyrainacorn was figthing jellyfish,then I saw the treasure.I went for it,but the jellyfish got me,but will I die......YES ,I will die. by julian kakapo yr 4.
I was snorkeling when suddenly I saw something sparkling. Fish were swimming around it. Guess what it was? Not a clourfull fish but strange lines and a round ball. Looking closer it was not a fish at all but an old rusted submarine. It must have been in the water a long time.
We are stuck here underwater in the squid sumbmarine. "Hey Sam, I can see the ring of power on the ocean floor! We need this to show the king.' Finally we have found what was lost long ago. But how do we get to it. "Open the hatch door Sam,' I, Frodo Baggins, said Excitedly.
“I see something!”, I shouted excitedly. It was shiny and bright golden coloured. My mate Mark grabbed it with the large pincers in front of the ship and pulled it inside. We had found it. Jackpot! They call it the Golden Jewel of the sea. We will be rich
I was sershing for Atlantis. I saw somthing shining in the distance, a gold jellyfish. I coudn't diside what was more important. I got the claw out grabed the jellyfish, pulled it in. If I didn't fined Atlantis I still had the jellyfish.
'A sea monster is coming this way, swim faster!' I screamed to my buddy. 'It looks scary with those big jaws and its arms are crawling around the sub. 'Is this were we die?' Then we saw something It was a girl. No it was a pink dolphin. 'Mermaid,' we whispered in amazment.
As we sweep through the murky water looking for the mythiccal treasure of red beard. We see many golden jellyfish. As the rusted claws of the submarine dig into the light-brown sand, we see something shine, could it be!? Our eyes glow with greed,I smile evilly... Now its mine!
ReplyDeleteBethan Bolton yr5 Kereru class
Going back to the same old place for the fifth time. I was terrified there are sharks staring at me. There are jellyfish circling me.As the same old digging legs dig into the rusty sand. wait i think i can see the sun floating in the sea.
ReplyDeleteSplash! We submerge into the misty black sea our search find the statue of liberty I only monitor the damage. Suddenly out of no where comes a swam of yellow jellyfish they rip at our sub "high damage" I race to the back of the sub and eject. BOOM! The submarine expolodes underneath me. What were those jellyfish?!
ReplyDeleteZac
The Snapping Claw
ReplyDeleteI continue through my ordinary day. Something grabs me by the tail I manage to wriggle free. As I swim away I stop, look back I float there shocked. The person in it gives me an evil glare but I shrink in with a school of fish and swim away.
Simonne - Kereru
Mystery of the deep
ReplyDeleteWho lives in a pineapple under the sea? ME!! And I'm out in my submarine looking for the, well, what I think is the most rare thing in the world. O my gosh! There it is! The yellow jelly fish I've been looking for my whole life. YES!! I'm rich...
Tim Year 5 Kereru
Sea of wonders
ReplyDeleteSomethings different about this sea.
I know it's those golden glimmering funny jellyfish and a school of blue shiny playful fish. The sun is shimmering down gold on the sea. I'm breathless a red fish looks startled at me this means only one thing... This is the sea of wonders...
Aria Healey (Kereru)
As I go deeper and deeper into the sea, I see one, two no three!!! Small little lights shinning through the pitch black sea. What is it? Could this, could this be the last few golden jelly fish? An evil grin appears onto my face, this is it, I'm rich!!!!
ReplyDeleteMaximus Year 6 (kereru)
As i go deeper into the ocean i could see fish swimming ferociously as if something is chasing them. But the out of nowhere i saw a creature jump onto my submarine. I tried to start the veichele but it has destroyed the main engine. Is this the end?
ReplyDeleteweka class year 6
I was travelling through the Atlantic Ocean in my submarine, when suddenly yellow jellyfish started to croud around me like a full rugby field. One had managed to get into my submarine and it stung me,Ouch that really hurt.
ReplyDeleteBy Jacob
YR 4
Kakapo class
I was in my submarine, suddenly bright yellow jellyfish came towards me, they wanted to sting me. I knew they didn't want me in their territory, all I was doing was trying to find the famous white shark.
ReplyDeleteWow,I'm amazed is this really it? I forced the controls down...Everything is so quiet. I look out the window of the submarine as I gaze at the crystal clear ocean water, jelly fish surround the submarine,I start to force the controls up but its to late....
ReplyDeleteBethan Bolton
yr5
Kereru class
As I jumped off the ragged rocks I landed in my rusty old submarine. I was off to find the lost treasure of Atlantis. When all of a sudden a jellyfish shocked my submarine and everything in the ship froze. I was trapped at the bottom of the ocean.
ReplyDeleteMorgen Nimmo
yr8
kea class
I plunged my old submarine into the cool water. I was on a mission. I was determind to find terasure. Suddenly I thought I saw some terasure! No just some junk. Jellyfish were coming closer. That's the end of me. I hoped that one day I would find some treasure.
ReplyDeleteBy Theresa Hills
Year 5
Kereru class
Bringing the Undiscovered to the Surface
ReplyDeleteI freeze. I’m petrified. Impossibly far away from the comfort of reality. Since the fish started disappearing, dad has become obsessed with finding the cause. And now we’ve found it. After years of searching, we’ve found it. My skin crawls and my blood turns icy cold as it emerges from the darkest depths of the ocean...
A Horrible Death
ReplyDelete"Arrrhhh!" I shouted."I've been down here for thousands of years looking for the....." I paused in excitment."The long lost treasure of my great grandad LIAM" I went out of the submarine to grab the fascinating treasure until a swarm of jellyfish came."ZZZZZZ!" I lay there,dead...
by Liam Nalder
year 6
Weka
Stuff happens! Hehe
ReplyDelete"Look" whispers dad.I read The newspaper headline,'SUNKEN SUB' Shocked, i race down to the docs and throw myself into the icy water, I swim for miles and miles until my Muscles burn with pain.This is the spot i think to myself, Dunking my head below the surface...
I got into my submarine then BANG CRASH AHAH what was that I said. My family ran to me I went under then the sea was crashing like a marching band. My ship was gone I tried to get my diving suit but it was to late DUN DUN DUN!
ReplyDeleteBY SAPPHIRE
KAKAPO CLASS YR 4
I scream out to my father, But it's too late. The submarine was already filled with water. I try to swim up to the surface but the pressure of the water is too strong. This is where I'll die, on the ocean's floor. With tears still in my shut eyes.
ReplyDeleteCaitlin Waters
Year 6
Kereru
I'm in the Atlantic Ocean. Octopus are surrounding me. I know one has swallowed the water ruby. I used the two claws to get them. But it was too late.....by daniel hillis.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to be rich!! Look at the golden jelly fish. I hop out of the submarine with my net. Got them! I hop back in and put them into a bag. I go back out. I'm looking for treasure so I dig. I am rich with gold.
ReplyDeleteBy Jordan
Deep Mythical Creatures
ReplyDeleteAs the fog of my minty breath covers the glass windows my mind collapsed with only one thought in my head 21 GOLD. After all these years of mystery and uncertainty these mythical creatures of the deep came to ME AND ONLY ME.
Anahera Hailes-Paku Kereru class Year 5
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DeleteWorld war 1
ReplyDeleteWhen the war all stared these to mean went in to a submarine.They where trying to get to gold land then FLICK!something hit the window, it was gold.So they got out in a hurry,FLASH!it got to bright to see..I knew that i died
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Finn
Kakapo class
The Submarine
ReplyDeleteAt the bottom of the green slimy ocean I saw seaweed stroking our submarine. Fish were leaping in and out of the sea. I hid in a corner of the submarine. I held onto a smooth metal rail. Then a light flashed. I looked up. Everything was gone.
Hannah Scott
Year 3
Whio class
Underwater
ReplyDeleteDeep under the sparkling blue sea, a submarine with two men inside it was stuck on the ocean floor. I heard a faint yell for help. I couldn't figure out what to do. Suddenly the water broke the glass and the men drowned. I felt miserable.
Mikayla Homesley
Year 3
Whio class
I was having a drive in my submarine OH NO my air was running out. Suddenly I arrived at Bikini Bottom. Then I saw Spongebob Squarepants with friends WOW. We had so much fun together so I stayed and had lunch at the Krusty Krab. YUM
ReplyDeleteHannah Jones
Kakapo
Deep down on the surface of the ocean in my little subarine.I took a peak outside the window all I could see was fish.Wait a second whats that the most shinyest thing iv'e ever seen in my life.I could be famous but how to get out there.
ReplyDeleteAs I drith deeper and deeper into these clear green waters I see something I have never seen before. Dazzling gold jellyfish are circling my submarine. Theen suddenly I hear a zap and a snap. the submarine is sinking I need to get out fast.
ReplyDeleteBy Catherine
HELP!!
ReplyDeleteTwo months I've been here. Nearly out of oxygen and the submarine is broken. I have nothing to take back
to the science lab. I am all alone with nothing but fish to amuse me. No food, no water. What to do, where to go. Help!
Megan Ritchie-Kereru class
THE HUMAN'S FIRST SUBMARINE.
ReplyDeleteThere was an army submarine. The submarine was looking for treasure. The treasure was diamonds and jewellery. The submarine has tentacles and crab claws.there are three jelly fish. The jelly fish can light up. I'm trying to survive in this dangerous water. I hope I will survive.
by Cordelia Stevenson
Tui
Year 2
The Creature
ReplyDeleteWe were underwater 250 miles under and we were doing our best to find a rare creature that if you touch it you will die.
We spotted the creature this animal was as deadly as a jellyfish, the captain held the creature.
It was to late the captain was dead as a doorknob.
by Madison McGregor
Kotuku
year 7
Xanthe Wardle WEKA CLASS. Year 5
ReplyDeleteToday was incredible. My Grandfather told me about a day of death but still life. A long Submarine traveled the seas. Grandaddy saw eletric fish and jellyfish as well as crabs and the sub acted like a crab too! Suddenly BOOM! The window broke! Did he survive? He did!
( V )
( ' ' ) BUNNY BEAR ALERT!! OVER THERE <-!!!
(:) (:)
In the deeps of the cold winter sea, me and my crew are searching for the famous diamond shark. Soon we
ReplyDeletesee a big glow. It is, the diamond shark! Finally! We grab it and kill it, but how will we get back up?
Oh no!!!!
I was in my submarine and it started rocking. I then relised it was an earthquake which could cause a tsunami. I then got taken under by the orce of the tsunami. I found myself unconscious in the middle of nowhere. I woke up...... Where was I. Know one new........
ReplyDeleteBy Bridgett (kea class)
" Captain's log 65 million years BC" Ben Rodgers on the time travelling submarine "The Jellyfish" , chief archaeologist at Nelson Museum reporting my first sighting of a mosasaur . It's really big, it's swimming fast, it appears to be hunting an orthocone. Dang, I must return to base to refill my airtanks.
ReplyDeleteBy Ben Rodgers
Yr 4
Kakapo
Oh! The great gold jellyfish,I watch the animal swim past the submarine. Then that is the moment when I saw the gloomy shadow I got closer and BOOM I lay unconscious. I woke up, the water was different, where was I?
ReplyDeleteBy Marina ( Kea class) :)
Ready to give up, I travel through the shimmering turquoise waters, I catch a glimpse of what I've spent my whole life looking for. Under the ruins of old pieces, I see the shimmer of gold through he thin sand and clench onto it with my claws. Jumping with joy I realise I've found something that could change the world forever...
ReplyDeleteThere it was the lost temple. "Wow look at the art work" said Kim. As we looked around the corner and there it lay, a six foot sub with two flesh eaten people. Then kaboom out of the wall a humungous meat eating stingray appeared and rip ahh my leg...
ReplyDeleteby alex
Kea class
year 8
I sit wondering, not believing where I am right now. Lurking further into the depths of the mystical waters I search for prized jewels. Suddenly a black figure strikes from behind. I make out the beast before fear drowns me. I scramble to find air but everything goes dark...
ReplyDeleteby max
kotuku class
Yr 7/8
As I sat in my crab mobile I saw some yellow jellyfish surrounding me. My friend was so scared he tried to jump out. It took all my strength to hold him back but what will become of us if they attack.
DeleteJack Morris
Kakapo year 4
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ReplyDeleteAs officer Craig Spalding looked out of his porthole, he saw a submarine, but this was no ordinary submarine. It looked like some mythical object from 1 hundred years ago.There were little golden fish swimming around the submarine. Suddenly the submarine started turning around and then, to Spalding's horror...
ReplyDeleteAdam Currie
Kea class
Year 7/8
As we headed down to the bottom of the ocean...these man-eating jellyfish started to eat through my submarine...I tried not to panic...but i started to scream. AHHHH were going to die... Captain Rogers tried to get his swim suit on... but it was to late!...clink
ReplyDeleteBy Emma Bouterey Kakapo :-)
One day two men hop into there submarine then they went a head. the two men stop four a snake then they went a head. Then the men and the submarine stop there was a big rock and on it was gold every where the two men got out on to the rock and collected so much gold and the two men came home rich the end.
ReplyDeleteI looked around at what seemed to be the last of our egsistince .A giant machine ( I think it's called it a submerine, ) had huge claws scooping up the sand and big tenticle things draining water. It felt like it was the end of the world,but we're only fish.
ReplyDeleteThe Jellyfish 3000
ReplyDeleteThe Jellyfish 3000 was gliding across the caspian sea.I flicked the switch and pulled the throttle.The engine roared as I started to pick up speed.BANG!! The engine stopped. I tried to pull up, but it did not work.I was doomed.......
Underwater!
ReplyDeleteI steered my boat out of the clear, see-through lake where my hometown used to be. I looked behind me. Should I really be doing this? Leaving my family doesn't sound right. But I had to. A huge war was coming. How could I? I had to choose ...
Josephine Hills
Year 3
Whio class
We are in a rusty submerine heading towards war land. Three purple jellyfish are surrouning us. I hope where safe! The sharp tentacles of the submerine will protect me. And I hope we don't get stuk in the weeds. I wish my family could be close to me.
ReplyDeleteI'm under water. The submarine is driving very fast. What is that? I cannot see it properly. Just then the engine stopped. Have I crashed into an iceberg? I think so. I sit there. I can't say a word. What shall i do? Oh know what's happening.
ReplyDeleteThe Mystical creatures float fluently through the gentle waters of the atlantic. But as the big submarine dominates the water the mystical creatures are now breathless and are racing towards the under water currents where people go but never return.
ReplyDeleteBy Zara
I stare out into the deep blue sea, wondering what lies ahead. Suddenly I see something shimering in the water, it reminds me of something that happened a long time ago something strange and eerie, something I still struggle to find an answer to.....
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ReplyDeleteWe are in a rusty submarine heading towards war land. Three purple, poisonous jellyfish are surrounding us. I hope we are safe! The sharp tentacles of the submarine will protect me. I hope we don't get stuck in the weeds. I wish my family could be close to me.
ReplyDeleteTreasure!
I'm in a submarine looking for the treasure of the waves, which was found by a young suffer who had no surf, but he found this gold necklace and wore it as a good luck charm. Others think it's a myth or legend but I believe...
The greatest discovery goes to the to the greatest disaster some where in asia two captains found poseidons treasure suddenely the engine fell silent.....we were stuck.
ReplyDeleteBy jakob yr 7-kea
I pack my bags and off i go for an adventure. In my submarine i go under the water and I see something in the distance what is that its coming closer and closer NO!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOh no I'm trapped. What do I do. I'm stuck I can't get out of my submarine. Isn't it orking the sea monster is coming, but when I shut my eyes it will be gone. First when I close my eyes and could to ten and open my eyes its gone.
ReplyDeleteBy Jasmine Barney yr 2 - Pikwaka
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ReplyDeleteAs I creep stealthily through the shallows in the thick, almost gelatinous water, I can't help but believe that someone has shadowed me here, even though I have taken precautions against this exact situation occurring. I freeze as I hear a thud on top of the boat. I am found.
ReplyDeleteTom Schultz
Year 8
Kotuku
50 words
I stare out of the foggy window of the submarine. I only have one thing on my mind. War. Am I going die or am or am I going to survive? Suddenly I see a shadow it's a shark; now I know I'm not going to survive.
ReplyDelete"Quick" I yelled! " we will never get out alive if we don't hurry up!" Finally we finished repearing the broken submarine. As we floated to the surface I felt the epitome of relief. "YAY we survived" I yelled but what i really want to know is how did it happen?...
ReplyDeleteA leak it was coming from one of the valves. I don`t know what to do I payed good money to escape in this submarine but now my life is at stake. As the submarine fulled with water, I felt my life draining away just as they got me...
ReplyDeleteBy Susannah
Kea class
Yr 7
This is by Wouter Froeling.
ReplyDeleteI live under water and I see jellyfish and fish. Just that normal stuff. Then I turned on my Submarine treasure finder and there it lay my only treasure that I had ever found. I look around at my Submarine in the blue water and crabbed the treasure. What now? I got the treasure.........
A i go deeper and deeper into the grey murky water my rustey old submarine starts to shake and i see something shiny first i thought it was treasure but no it was the golden jelly fish and they were all a round me. What now? i found the golden jellyfish.
ReplyDeleteBy Jamie Mcquillan
Kea class
year 7
Wouter Froeling.
ReplyDeleteI live under water and I see jellyfish and fish. Just that normal stuff.Then I turned my Submarine treasure finder on and there it lay my only treasure that I had ever found. I looked around at my Submarine in the blue water and grabbed the treasure! What now? I have got the treasure...............
I was in my 50 million dollar submarine. As soon as I hop in it starts putting , putt , putt ,putt.I suudenly stop.I was sinking I was sinking fast.I was about to die suddenly I woke it was all a dream.
ReplyDeleteIt was looking right into my eyes i did not know what it was was was it a fish i don't know all of a sudden it dissaperd in the murky sea water
ReplyDeleteI was traveling in my submarine for the lost treasure of Atlantis when suddenly golden jelly fish were surrounding me. I knew I was close to Atlantis so I charged through the jelly fish to get to the lost treasure.
ReplyDeleteBY Ceanna Kakapo YR 4
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"Oh barnicals"! The chubby, stocky man from the local
ReplyDeletechippy said he ran out of fish. So I drifted in my green submarine
to catch my own fish. "BINGO"! A Red Snapper was right in front
of me. My mechanical tentacles reached out and grabbed the fish.
Fish problem solved!
World War 2's going on up there. I had to escape. But now I'm stuck down here in this darned tincan called a submarine! I'm getting worried. What if my food runs out or someone finds me? But worst of all, what if I DIE?
ReplyDeleteHannah Stevenson
Yr 7
Kea Class
I pulled up the controls and tried to pick up the green stone. I want it. I started thrashing round knocking my team mate in the nose. Suddenly there was a scream from behind. I didn't know that water was coming through the crack. I couldn't breath. I was stuck lying there helplessly.
ReplyDeleteIn the deep dark murky waters below lurks a cold mechanical beast searching for anything to capture, to feed on. Inside the monster is a human. This human pilots the beast towards its prey and as soon as the monster is near its prey it launches itself and! dead silence.
ReplyDeleteDaniel Fahey
Time to go I said good bye to my family I wave good bye and jump in and go down it got it darker and darker and darker and boom boom boom I hit the botten of the sea and then I see a family of school fish it lookes like me when I was at school bad times bad times then back I go.
ReplyDeleteI was in my submarine and then SCREECHHHHH!!! I saw an amazing sight of a jellyfish and then I recognized this. It was a special gold jellyfish that hasn’t been spotted for 100 years. I rushed to get my diving gear, but then thump it was an octopus, DOOM, HELP.
ReplyDeleteDylan Didi
Yr5
Kereru Class
We are on the search for the source the of the snapper invasion that has been covering our shores for the last fortnight or so. As we search the ocean floor, we come across three golden jellyfish, people have not seen them for over 100 years, they were amazing.
ReplyDeleteYou never know what under the sea would look like unless you went down yourself in a rusty, old submarine. There are fish and creatures of some sort in all different colours, sizes and shapes. All of a sudden I'm swung back to reality as my sister screams me awake.
ReplyDeleteBy Grace - Kea
oh,hello jellyfish what a minute its going to break the glass!*code red code red*oh no help help!I had a good life.waa waa waa.well this is It im going to die.wait a minute this is a dream.
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DeleteI watch as the rusted claw digs into the sand and swarms of pretty yellow jellyfish surround my submarine.All of a sudden they scatter a bigger,badder an octopus its horrible arms wrap around the submarine.I scream in terror as the submarine breaks.I'm alive I scream.
ReplyDeleteImogen year 5 kereru
Once upon a time two men lived in a creepy crawlly beetle submarine, as they used their tenticles to catch golden glowing jellyfish to light the way to the treasure...oh no look out.... there is a great white shark just up in front of us ...what shall we do!
ReplyDeleteThe Mythical Creatures of the Deep
ReplyDeleteAs I open my mouth my cold minty breath hovers over the glass windows...
After all these years of mystery and uncertainty, searching under water, they come to me and only me what do I do Next with these Mythical Creatures of the Deep
Anahera Hailes-Paku
Kereru Class
Year 5
The cold water raps my ankles sending stingy tingles through my icey spine, i think about it, the man whose been missing for years in a sub in this ocean floor sent me worried and dizzy. i wonder what hes been looking for all these years dimands rubys nobody knows!
ReplyDeleteDie or live
ReplyDeleteSam got into his banana split submarine and it can come alive when you go down in the water. Then he went down, down right to the smooth soft sand. Eek, eek the submarine was dead. Then a bright jellyfish light came to sting Sam. What will happen next?
BY SAPPHIRE KAKAPO YR 4
There was a mysterious submarine. As it creeped along the bottom of the ocean the pliot looked out the window and saw some glowing jellyfish and a red fish. The pilot could not stay under water for too long as he was running out fo air. Lily (Room Weka)
ReplyDeleteI was in my submarine,me,jake and ladyrainacorn was figthing jellyfish,then I saw the treasure.I went for it,but the jellyfish got me,but will I die......YES ,I will die.
ReplyDeleteby julian kakapo yr 4.
I was snorkeling when suddenly I saw something sparkling. Fish were swimming around it. Guess what it was?
ReplyDeleteNot a clourfull fish but strange lines and a round ball. Looking closer it was not a fish at all but an old rusted submarine. It must have been in the water a long time.
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Isaac Lewis
Tui Class
Year 2
We are stuck here underwater in the squid sumbmarine.
ReplyDelete"Hey Sam, I can see the ring of power on the ocean floor! We need this to show the king.'
Finally we have found what was lost long ago. But how do we get to it.
"Open the hatch door Sam,' I, Frodo Baggins, said Excitedly.
Oliver Lewis
Piwakawaka Class
Year 3
“I see something!”, I shouted excitedly. It was shiny and bright golden coloured. My mate Mark grabbed it with the large pincers in front of the ship and pulled it inside.
ReplyDeleteWe had found it. Jackpot! They call it the Golden Jewel of the sea. We will be rich
ALISHA
WEKA
YEAR 6
I was sershing for Atlantis. I saw somthing shining in the distance, a gold jellyfish. I coudn't diside what was more important. I got the claw out grabed the jellyfish, pulled it in. If I didn't fined Atlantis I still had the jellyfish.
ReplyDeleteTankeeka Lewis, Kereru
'A sea monster is coming this way, swim faster!' I screamed to my buddy.
ReplyDelete'It looks scary with those big jaws and its arms are crawling around the sub.
'Is this were we die?' Then we saw something It was a girl. No it was a pink dolphin.
'Mermaid,' we whispered in amazment.
Jasmine Barney
Piwaka
year 2